Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达记忆能力。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, before exams, I can quickly recall important information, which helps me achieve high scores.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议使用简单句子清楚描述忘记的重要事情，并说明原因和感受。

예시: Yes, I once forgot to defrost food from the fridge because I was playing video games. As a result, we couldn't have a proper dinner, which was embarrassing and taught me a lesson.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但句子结构重复且有语法错误，建议简化表达并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

예시: As a high school student, I need to remember important knowledge and revise it regularly, even during holidays. Also, due to my health, I must remember to take my daily medication.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和逻辑混乱，建议使用简洁句子说明记忆方法，并说明其优点。

예시: I usually write important things down because notes help me remember better. I also make it a habit to review my notes regularly, which is very helpful.

× I felt self satisfied about my skills of memories and things.

✓ I felt self-satisfied about my memory skills and things.

这里“self satisfied”应为形容词“self-satisfied”，表示“自我满足的”。另外，“skills of memories”表达不准确，应改为“memory skills”，更符合英语习惯。

× my skills of memories and things

✓ my memory skills and things

“memories”是复数名词，但这里应使用不可数名词“memory”来表示记忆能力。

× I thought I memorized things very fast such as before an exam I could recite those knowledge in a in a high rate and achieving a high score so that the quality of my memorizing is also insured.

✓ I thought I memorized things very fast; for example, before an exam I could recite that knowledge at a high rate and achieve a high score, so the quality of my memorization is also ensured.

“those knowledge”应为不可数名词“that knowledge”；“achieving”应改为动词原形“achieve”以保持句子结构一致；“insured”用词错误，应为“ensured”，表示“保证”。

× before an exam I could recite those knowledge in a in a high rate

✓ before an exam I could recite that knowledge at a high rate

固定搭配是“at a high rate”，表示“以高速度”，而不是“in a high rate”。

× I remember there's a time where my parents taught me to unfronden those foods from the fridges and but I would stick with the video games.

✓ I remember a time when my parents taught me to defrost the food from the fridge, but I would stick with the video games.

“there's a time where”应改为“a time when”；“unfronden”是拼写错误，应为“defrost”；“foods”通常用不可数名词“food”；“fridges”复数不合适，改为单数“fridge”；“and but”重复，应去掉“and”。

× this kind of experiences is very shame and a tough lesson taught me.

✓ this kind of experience is very shameful and a tough lesson taught to me.

“experiences”应为单数“experience”与“this kind of”搭配；“shame”是名词，应改为形容词“shameful”；“taught me”缺少介词，应为“taught to me”。

× this kind of experiences is very shame

✓ this kind of experience is very shameful

“this kind of”后应接单数名词“experience”，而非复数“experiences”。

× Since I was still still a high school student so there are a lot of knowledge and key points I should learn even though I was spending my holidays and I often have to revise them.

✓ Since I was still a high school student, there was a lot of knowledge and key points I should learn even when I was spending my holidays, and I often had to revise them.

“Since”引导时间状语从句，后面不应再用“so”；“knowledge”是不可数名词，前面用“a lot of”正确；时态应保持一致，过去时用“was”、“had to”。

× I have to remember to eat the daily pills every day.

✓ I have to remember to take the daily pills every day.

“eat pills”用词不当，正确表达应为“take pills”。

× Well, the most convenient way is written them down, because no notes can be kept for as long as you want to discard them.

✓ Well, the most convenient way is writing them down, because no notes can be kept for as long as you want to discard them.

“is”后应接动名词“writing”而非过去分词“written”。

× So and there it can have a habit to check the notes so that you can also check with the things you need have to remember simultaneously, which is a very convenient.

✓ So, you can develop a habit of checking the notes so that you can also review the things you need to remember simultaneously, which is very convenient.

“So and there”搭配错误，应去掉“and there”；“have a habit to”应为“develop a habit of”；“check with the things”表达不当，应为“review the things”；“you need have to”重复，应为“you need to”。