Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения, что снижает его естественность и эффективность. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы слов и избегать избыточности, а также структурировать ответ с четким вступлением и поддерживающими деталями.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things. For example, I always remember the shopping list my mom gives me when I go to the store, which helps me buy everything we need.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Следует отвечать прямо на вопрос, использовать связующие слова для логичности и приводить конкретные примеры, чтобы сделать ответ более содержательным.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes. For instance, I once forgot the shopping list my mom gave me, which made it difficult to buy all the items we needed.

제안: Ответ слишком короткий и не полностью раскрывает тему. Рекомендуется расширить ответ, добавив больше конкретных деталей и использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember several things, such as having my coffee and breakfast every morning. Besides that, I also try to remember my appointments and tasks for the day.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткую структуру. Рекомендуется строить предложения правильно, использовать связующие слова и более подробно объяснять методы запоминания.

예시: I remember important things by writing them down in my notebook. This method helps me avoid forgetting tasks or appointments.

× Yes I'm good at memorizing thing because I always remember everything no matter what.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things because I always remember everything no matter what.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items in general. Using singular here is incorrect when talking about memorizing multiple items.

× No matter everything I remember like least which give me my mom when I go to the shop.

✓ No matter what, I remember the list which my mom gives me when I go to the shop.

The phrase 'No matter everything' is incorrect; it should be 'No matter what'. Also, 'least' is a misspelling of 'list'. The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'my mom'.

× When I forgot something important.

✓ When I forget something important.

The sentence fragment uses past tense 'forgot' but the context suggests a general statement, so present tense 'forget' is appropriate. Also, the sentence is incomplete and should be connected to the next part.

× When I forgot something important. I'm trying remember this but very often I've forgotten something important like list which give me my mom.

✓ When I forget something important, I try to remember it, but very often I've forgotten something important like the list which my mom gives me.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions. 'I'm trying remember this' is incorrect; it should be 'I try to remember it'. Also, 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with 'my mom'. 'List' should have the definite article 'the'.

× like list which give me my mom

✓ like the list which my mom gives me

The noun 'list' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' and the verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'my mom'.

× I need to remember coffee maybe, or breakfast, which I have every morning.

✓ I need to remember coffee, maybe, or breakfast, which I have every morning.

The comma placement is awkward; adding commas improves clarity. The phrase 'coffee maybe' is better separated by commas to indicate uncertainty.

× Important things I remember. Written in my notebook because I always forgotten about it.

✓ I remember important things written in my notebook because I always forget about them.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect tense 'forgotten' without auxiliary verb. 'I always forgotten' should be 'I always forget'. Also, 'things' is plural, so pronoun should be 'them'.