Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然，建议避免使用口语化且模糊的表达，如"That's bad"，可以用更具体的描述来丰富答案。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I place my phone, which can be quite frustrating.

제안: 回答直接但缺少细节和连贯性，建议使用连接词并补充更多细节来丰富内容。

예시: Yes, I once forgot the deadline for my essay, so unfortunately, I missed the submission and lost marks as a result.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important deadlines for my homework. Besides that, I also try to remind myself to drink more water and eat plenty of vegetables to stay healthy.

제안: 回答内容完整且表达清晰，但句子较长，建议适当拆分句子并使用连接词提高表达的自然度。

예시: I usually make a list on my phone to keep track of things I need to do because it's very convenient. Also, I set reminders so I don't forget important tasks.

× Yes, I once forgot the deadline of my essay, so I just lost the mark.

✓ Yes, I once forgot the deadline of my essay, so I just lost the marks.

这里的“mark”应使用复数形式“marks”，因为通常论文的分数是复数形式。属于单复数问题。

× Yes, I once forgot the deadline of my essay, so I just lost the mark.

✓ Yes, I once forgot the deadline of my essay, so I just lost the marks.

“mark”在这里指的是分数，通常用复数形式“marks”，表示多项分数。应使用复数形式。