Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you good at memorising things?
수험생
Well, I used to have a very sharp brain that I could remember everything I need and it was so helpful for me in studying and I could even remember a whole long story that my friend told me. But now as time goes by, my memorizing ability now is worse than before and I think I should do something.
시험관
Have you ever forgotten something important?
수험생
Yes, I have and I'm gonna tell you about this one time that I forgot to bring my pocket when I went to supermarket and of course I couldn't pay for my stuff so I have to leave the queue in embarrassment.
시험관
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
수험생
I think the thing that I must not forget in my daily life is to treat myself right, like to maintain a healthy and balanced life. For example, like eating healthy, exercising at least 30 minutes every day and learning something new.
시험관
How do you remember important things?
수험생
Actually I have this tip and I think everyone is doing it to make sure any necessary things are forgotten is taking notes. I always write down something I need to do. For example I always make a list before I going shopping.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số phần lặp lại không cần thiết. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: I used to have a sharp memory, which helped me a lot in studying. For example, I could easily remember long stories my friends told me. However, recently my memorizing ability has declined, so I plan to practice memory exercises to improve it.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ như dùng 'wallet' thay vì 'pocket' khi nói về ví tiền. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn, tránh dùng từ lóng như 'gonna'.
예시: Yes, I once forgot to bring my wallet when I went to the supermarket. As a result, I couldn't pay for my items and had to leave the queue feeling embarrassed.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
점수: 80.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'like'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng các từ vựng phong phú hơn để mô tả thói quen hàng ngày.
예시: I believe it's important to remember to take care of myself by maintaining a healthy and balanced lifestyle. For instance, I eat nutritious food, exercise for at least 30 minutes daily, and try to learn something new regularly.
How do you remember important things?
점수: 75.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'before I going shopping' nên là 'before I go shopping'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như 'any necessary things are forgotten'. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.
예시: To remember important things, I usually take notes. For example, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store to ensure I don't forget anything.
문법
× For example I always make a list before I going shopping.
✓ For example I always make a list before I go shopping.
The verb 'going' is incorrectly used after 'before I'. After 'before I', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'going' should be corrected to 'go'. This is because 'before' is a conjunction that requires the base form of the verb in this context.
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