Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'kind of good to memorize' and 'keep to remind my kids and my'. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because my studies in biology require me to remember many details. However, sometimes I struggle to remember personal tasks, like reminding my kids about their activities.

제안: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrasing, such as 'I I forgot, forgot' and 'I make I I forgot'. Try to avoid repeating words unnecessarily and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I sometimes misplace my keys or phone, and occasionally I miss important deadlines because I forget the dates.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains many repetitions and incomplete ideas. Focus on answering the question directly by listing specific things you need to remember daily. Use clear sentences and linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to get enough sleep, exercise regularly, and eat healthy meals. These habits help me stay healthy and focused throughout the day.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has repeated phrases like 'for reminding upcoming deadlines'. Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear examples of your methods.

예시: To remember important things, I set alarms and reminders on my mobile phone. Additionally, I write important dates on a calendar to keep track of upcoming deadlines.

× I think I'm kind of good to memorize things because of my educational background as I'm a biological students, so I have to memorize a lot of things throughout a long period.

✓ I think I'm kind of good at memorizing things because of my educational background as I'm a biological student, so I have to memorize a lot of things over a long period.

The word 'students' should be singular 'student' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. Also, 'good to memorize' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'good at memorizing'. 'Throughout a long period' is better expressed as 'over a long period'. These corrections fix singular/plural agreement and preposition usage.

× But sometimes I have to struggle to keep to remind my kids and my.

✓ But sometimes I struggle to remember to remind my kids and myself.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Keep to remind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'remember to remind'. Also, 'my' is incomplete and should be 'myself' to complete the thought. This correction improves sentence structure and pronoun use.

× Yes, I I forgot, forgot sometimes where I put my keys and mobiles, sometimes I forgot to reach charge my phones and sometimes I make I I forgot and I can't recall the important deadlines and important dates.

✓ Yes, I sometimes forget where I put my keys and mobile phones, sometimes I forget to charge my phones, and sometimes I forget and can't recall important deadlines and dates.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget' to indicate habitual action. 'Reach charge' is incorrect; it should be 'charge'. Also, 'mobiles' is better as 'mobile phones'. The sentence is corrected for tense consistency and clarity.

× I think as as my personal perspective, getting enough sleep is more important to remember anything.

✓ I think, from my personal perspective, getting enough sleep is more important than remembering anything else.

The phrase 'as as my personal perspective' is incorrect; 'from my personal perspective' is correct. Also, 'more important to remember anything' is unclear; it should be 'more important than remembering anything else' to express comparison properly.

× Moreover, physical activity, yoga, meditations and prayer prepared in time and take up take up regular regular meals and healthy meals been able.

✓ Moreover, physical activity, yoga, meditation, and prayer should be done on time, and taking regular healthy meals is important.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('take up take up regular regular meals'). 'Meditations' should be singular 'meditation'. The sentence is corrected for clarity, proper verb usage, and removal of repetition.

× For remembering important things I set alarms or reminder in my mobile.

✓ To remember important things, I set alarms or reminders on my mobile.

The phrase 'For remembering' is better as 'To remember'. 'Reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match 'alarms'. The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on my mobile' is correct.

× I also take the important dates on calendars for upcoming deadlines, for reminding, for reminding upcoming deadlines and also I am and also.

✓ I also mark important dates on calendars for upcoming deadlines to remind myself.

'Take the important dates on calendars' is incorrect; 'mark important dates on calendars' is correct. The phrase 'for reminding, for reminding' is repetitive and unclear. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper verb usage.