Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简化句子结构，避免重复使用词汇，并且注意时态和语法的正确性。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来描述你的记忆方式。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I like to capture special moments with photographs. For instance, when I was a student, I often took pictures with my classmates and teachers to remember those unique times. These photos help me recall important experiences clearly.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更清晰的句子表达忘记重要事情的原因，并避免口语化的填充词。

예시: Yes, sometimes I forget important things because I am very busy and don't have enough time to focus on remembering everything.

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确说明日常需要记住的事情，并用连贯的句子表达。避免使用不相关或模糊的词汇。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my plans and tasks. I usually make a to-do list and try to follow it, but sometimes I get distracted, which makes me feel frustrated.

제안: 回答重复且缺乏连贯性，建议简化表达，避免重复词汇，并且用更具体的细节说明如何记忆重要事情。

예시: I remember important things by taking photos with my mobile phone. For example, I capture special moments from my school life to help me recall those memories later.

× Yes, I'm quite memorizing things because I I enjoy preserving special moments through photographs.

✓ Yes, I'm quite good at memorizing things because I enjoy preserving special moments through photographs.

这里的错误是动词-ing形式的错误用法。'I'm quite memorizing things'是不正确的表达，应该用形容词短语 'good at memorizing things' 来表达擅长记忆。建议使用 'good at + 动名词' 结构。

× Actually, sometime I will forget something which is very indispensable for me 'cause yeah, because I'm too busy right now, so I don't have any time to make me recall some memories.

✓ Actually, sometimes I forget something which is very indispensable for me because I'm too busy right now, so I don't have any time to recall some memories.

这里'sometime' 应为复数形式 'sometimes'，表示有时。'I will forget' 在此语境中应使用一般现在时 'I forget'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。'to make me recall' 结构不正确，应直接用 'to recall'。

× Maybe, yeah, sometimes I will try to make a plan and I will try to follow the list and to do something, but sometime I will fall gossiping on this, so it made me feel annoying.

✓ Maybe, yeah, sometimes I try to make a plan and follow the list to do something, but sometimes I get distracted by gossiping, so it makes me feel annoyed.

'sometime' 应为 'sometimes'。'fall gossiping on this' 是错误表达，应改为 'get distracted by gossiping'。'made me feel annoying' 应为 'makes me feel annoyed'，形容词和被动语态使用错误。

× Yes, I, as I have mentioned, I will try to memorize, memorize times through photographs.

✓ Yes, as I have mentioned, I try to memorize moments through photographs.

重复使用 'memorize' 不自然，应去掉重复。'memorize times' 不合适，改为 'memorize moments' 更准确。时态应与上下文一致，使用一般现在时。

× Yeah, just use the mobile phone to capture some unique and unforgettable times.

✓ Yeah, I just use my mobile phone to capture some unique and unforgettable moments.

'use the mobile phone' 应为 'use my mobile phone'，表示特指自己的手机。'times' 用于此处不合适，改为 'moments' 更自然。