Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に対して直接的ですが、文法の誤りや繰り返しがあり、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。より自然で効果的な表現を使い、具体的な例を明確に述べることが必要です。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, when I study world history, I can easily remember the names of important Asian figures because I use specific strategies to help me recall them.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。話の流れを整理し、具体的な状況や結果を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I was very busy and forgot about a meeting. Fortunately, my teacher reminded me, so I didn't miss it.

제안: 文が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。日常生活で覚えるべきことを具体的に述べ、簡潔で明確な文章を心がけましょう。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. Therefore, I always write them down in a planner so I can review and complete them on time.

제안: 表現が不自然で意味が不明瞭な部分があります。具体的な方法を明確に述べ、文法と語彙の正確さを向上させる必要があります。

예시: I usually write memos and make schedules to remember important things. For example, I keep track of my appointments and deadlines in a notebook, using different colored pens to highlight urgent tasks.

× I prefer to remember about a lot of things like English words or social studies phrases.

✓ I prefer to remember a lot of things like English words or social studies phrases.

The verb 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about'. Using 'about' here is incorrect. The correct form is 'remember a lot of things'.

× For example, if I learn about world history, I I I'm always able to remember the Asian people's name strategy.

✓ For example, if I learn about world history, I am always able to remember the names of Asian people and their strategies.

The original sentence has repetition ('I I I'm') and unclear phrasing ('Asian people's name strategy'). The correction removes repetition and clarifies meaning by specifying 'names of Asian people and their strategies'.

× Yes, I've ever forgotten some important things because umm, actually I was so busy that at at that time and I forgot about the schedule of meeting.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten some important things because I was so busy at that time and I forgot about the meeting schedule.

'I've ever forgotten' is incorrect; 'ever' is not used with present perfect in affirmative sentences. Also, 'schedule of meeting' should be 'meeting schedule'. The phrase 'at at that time' has repetition and is corrected to 'at that time'.

× However umm I could be awarded to forgo forget that by my teacher, so I was.

✓ However, I was forgiven by my teacher, so I was relieved.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect modal verb usage and word choice ('could be awarded to forgo forget'). The correction uses the correct passive form 'was forgiven' and clarifies the meaning.

× Keeping the memories or making some plannings are needed for my daily life to remembers so well because I always keep in mind to write some write down something to remember so well and also like I will be able to review that with.

✓ Keeping memories or making plans is necessary for my daily life to remember well because I always keep in mind to write things down and review them later.

'Plannings' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'plans'. 'Memories' is used without 'the' here. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I usually try to keep memos or make some schedules to remember my memories.

✓ I usually try to keep memos or make schedules to remember important things.

'Remember my memories' is redundant and awkward. It's better to say 'remember important things'. Also, 'make some schedules' is better as 'make schedules'.

× For example I always do keeping the schedule or taxes in my books and I usually write down with it with cover pens to not save.

✓ For example, I always keep schedules or tasks in my books and usually write them down with colored pens to remember better.

'Do keeping' is incorrect; use 'keep'. 'Taxes' is likely a mishearing of 'tasks'. 'Write down with it with cover pens to not save' is unclear; corrected to 'write them down with colored pens to remember better'.