Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了原因，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为简单。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often stay up late, which I think affects my brain and memory.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但表达有些重复且不够流畅。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意词汇的准确使用。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, but I usually write them down on paper or save them on my phone so I can easily check my calendar or reminder apps.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议注意单复数和时态的正确使用，并用更自然的表达方式描述。

예시: I need to remember my work schedule every day. Sometimes my tasks come up suddenly, so I write them down in advance to prepare for them.

제안: 回答表达了方法，但语法和用词不准确。建议注意冠词和复数形式的使用，并使句子更简洁自然。

예시: I usually write important things on paper and set reminders or alarms on my phone's calendar to notify me.

× No I'm not good at memorizing things because I'm always sleep very late so I think it affect my brain so that affect my memorizing ability.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things because I always sleep very late, so I think it affects my brain and that affects my memorizing ability.

The verb 'sleep' should be in the present tense 'sleep' to match the subject 'I' and the adverb 'always'. Also, 'affect' should be 'affects' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The conjunction 'so that' is better replaced with 'and that' to connect the two clauses properly.

× Yes I have, but normally I would write the important things down into the paper wherever I can see easily or write it down to my phone so I can check on my calendar or some some like this app.

✓ Yes, I have, but normally I write the important things down on paper wherever I can see them easily or write them down on my phone so I can check my calendar or some app like this.

The modal verb 'would' is unnecessary here; simple present 'write' is appropriate for habitual actions. The preposition 'into' should be 'on' when referring to writing on paper. 'Some some like this app' is corrected to 'some app like this' for clarity and correctness.

× I need to remember my work schedule in my daily life. Sometimes my work is very suddenly, so I need to write them down and when the day come I can prepare it before it.

✓ I need to remember my work schedule in my daily life. Sometimes my work is very sudden, so I need to write it down, and when the day comes, I can prepare for it beforehand.

'Suddenly' is an adverb; the adjective 'sudden' is correct here. 'Them' should be 'it' to agree with the singular 'schedule'. 'Come' should be 'comes' to agree with singular 'day'. Added 'for' after 'prepare' and changed 'before it' to 'beforehand' for natural expression.

× I usually write the important things down to the paper and set a reminders on the calendar on my phone and make alarm to notice me.

✓ I usually write the important things down on paper, set reminders on the calendar on my phone, and set an alarm to notify me.

The preposition 'to' should be 'on' when referring to writing on paper. 'A reminders' is incorrect; it should be 'reminders' or 'a reminder'. 'Make alarm to notice me' is unnatural; 'set an alarm to notify me' is the correct expression.