Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific examples or reasons using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and awkward phrasing.

예시: I am fairly good at memorising things, but it depends on the type of information. For example, I can easily remember important dates, but sometimes I forget new details if I don't review them regularly.

제안: Your answer should be more direct and natural. Avoid grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain why forgetting happens or give an example to enrich your answer.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, which is quite common. For instance, I once missed a meeting because I forgot to check my calendar.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Provide a clear topic sentence about what you need to remember daily, then support it with specific examples and linking words to make your answer logical and relevant.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks like appointments and deadlines. For example, I always keep a to-do list to help me stay organised and not forget important activities.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making it more natural and adding linking words to explain your method clearly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'our document'.

예시: I remember important things by taking notes and saving them on my phone. For instance, I use a note-taking app to record reminders and check them regularly.

× Some information gets saved in my brain for a long period of time and sometimes a newly learned information does not get held enough time.

✓ Some information gets saved in my brain for a long period of time and sometimes newly learned information does not stay long enough.

The word 'information' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'does not get held enough time' is awkward; 'does not stay long enough' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Many people God forget sometimes important information.

✓ Many people sometimes forget important information.

The word 'God' is incorrectly inserted and should be removed. Also, the adverb 'sometimes' should be placed before the verb 'forget' for correct word order.

× We need to remember ourselves, because if we don't remember ourselves, we will not be able to remember anything else.

✓ We need to remember things ourselves, because if we don't, we will not be able to remember anything else.

The reflexive pronoun 'ourselves' is incorrectly used here. It is better to say 'remember things ourselves' or simply 'remember things' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× By keeping a note and recording it in my phone or on our document or text document.

✓ By keeping a note and recording it on my phone or in a document or text file.

The pronoun 'our' is inconsistent with 'my phone'. Also, 'on our document or text document' is awkward; 'in a document or text file' is more natural and grammatically correct.