Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct vocabulary. For example, instead of 'memory things' say 'memorizing things', and clarify what you mean by 'reputation' and 'parents'.

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things, but I use some techniques to help me. For instance, I write things down and repeat them to improve my memory.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using correct verb tenses and more varied vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I rarely forget important things because I repeat them in my mind several times. Additionally, I write them down to help me remember better.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use a clear topic sentence and link your supporting details logically.

예시: As a student, I need to remember information from my textbooks. To do this, I read the articles aloud and write notes to reinforce my memory.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct prepositions, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your steps logically.

예시: I usually write important things down immediately. Later, I add more details and review my notes to help me remember.

× I don't think I'm so good at memory things but I do have some skills in memorize.

✓ I don't think I'm very good at memorizing things but I do have some skills in memorization.

The phrase 'memory things' is incorrect; 'memorizing things' is the correct gerund form to describe the action. Also, 'skills in memorize' should be 'skills in memorization' because 'memorization' is the noun form that fits here. Additionally, 'so good' is better replaced with 'very good' for natural expression.

× Like I think reputation is the most important and we can use our parents like we write down them to help us memorize things.

✓ Like, I think repetition is the most important and we can use our parents, like writing things down to help us memorize.

The word 'reputation' is incorrect; the intended word is 'repetition'. Also, 'we write down them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'writing things down'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I seldom forgot something important because if they're very important, I'll recall them over and over again.

✓ I seldom forget something important because if it's very important, I'll recall it over and over again.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'they're' should be 'it's' to agree with the singular 'something important'. 'Them' should be 'it' to match the singular subject.

× So it helps me to memorize them.

✓ So it helps me to memorize it.

The pronoun 'them' is plural but the antecedent is singular 'something important', so 'it' should be used for agreement.

× And what's more, I'd like to write them down to help me memorize.

✓ And what's more, I'd like to write it down to help me memorize.

The pronoun 'them' is plural but the context refers to singular 'something important', so 'it' is appropriate.

× Most today there are articles in my textbooks since I'm a student now, so I try to read them aloud and write them down to help me memorize it, reinforce my memory.

✓ Most of the time today, there are articles in my textbooks since I'm a student now, so I try to read them aloud and write them down to help me memorize them and reinforce my memory.

The phrase 'Most today' is incorrect; 'Most of the time today' is more natural. Also, 'memorize it' is incorrect because 'them' refers to 'articles' which is plural. The sentence also needs 'and' to connect the two actions properly.

× I usually write them down on my immediately and later I'd like to write my more and add some details to it so and I also want to reread them.

✓ I usually write them down immediately and later I'd like to write more and add some details to it, and I also want to reread them.

The phrase 'on my immediately' is incorrect; 'immediately' should stand alone as an adverb. 'Write my more' is incorrect; it should be 'write more'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs commas and conjunctions for clarity.