Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains contradictions, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with clear examples. Avoid confusing statements and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially faces. For instance, even if I meet someone only once, I can usually remember their face. However, I sometimes struggle to recall their names. I believe I have a photographic memory because during college, I was able to memorise many medical terms easily.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more specific and concise. Use linking words to organize your answer and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important details before. For example, I once forgot a password I set on my computer because I didn't write it down. This experience taught me to keep important information in a safe place.

제안: Your answer does not directly address the question and is incomplete. Focus on answering the question clearly with relevant details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and complete your thoughts.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks such as appointments and deadlines. For example, I use a planner to keep track of these things so I don't forget them.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and somewhat unclear. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and complete your thoughts.

예시: I remember important things by using different methods depending on the situation. For example, when studying for exams, I repeat the information several times to memorize it. For passwords, I write them down in a secure place so I don't forget them.

× Particularly I'm good with the faces.

✓ Particularly, I'm good with faces.

The use of 'the' before 'faces' is incorrect here because it refers to faces in general, not specific ones. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Even if we just met or I have met that person one time, I will.

✓ Even if we have just met or I have met that person one time, I can remember their face.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'can remember their face' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× I can't remember her face and also sometimes the names.

✓ I can remember her face and also sometimes the names.

The sentence contradicts the intended meaning. Changing 'can't' to 'can' aligns with the context of being good at remembering faces.

× I used to memorize all the medical terms.

✓ I used to memorise all the medical terms.

'Memorise' is the British English spelling consistent with 'memorising' used earlier; correcting spelling for consistency.

× Yes, there were times that I forgot an important details that I need to memorize, for example a contact details or a password that I I set on my computer and I forgot it because I didn't put it in my notes.

✓ Yes, there were times that I forgot important details that I needed to memorize, for example contact details or a password that I set on my computer and forgot because I didn't put it in my notes.

'An important details' is incorrect because 'details' is plural; 'an' should be removed. Also, 'need' should be past tense 'needed' to match 'forgot'. Repetition of 'I' is removed for clarity.

× a contact details or a password

✓ contact details or a password

'Contact details' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× I never really thought about that question.

✓ I have never really thought about that question.

Using present perfect 'have never really thought' is more appropriate to express experience up to now.

× I think we should always be grateful on what we have and what we are in now because five years from now we will look back and we will think about why didn't I appreciate the things that happened in the past because.

✓ I think we should always be grateful for what we have and where we are now because five years from now we will look back and think about why we didn't appreciate the things that happened in the past.

The correct preposition is 'grateful for' not 'grateful on'. Also, 'what we are in now' is corrected to 'where we are now'. The indirect question is rephrased for clarity.

× I think it really depends in the situation you're into.

✓ I think it really depends on the situation you're in.

The correct preposition is 'depends on' and 'you're in' instead of 'you're into' for this context.

× Or of course, repetition is the key.

✓ Of course, repetition is the key.

Starting a sentence with 'Or' here is unnecessary and incorrect; removing it improves sentence flow.