Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“memorial”应为“memorising”，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意单词拼写和语法，简洁表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: Not really. I often forget things I plan to do, so I usually use a smartphone app to make a to-do list to help me remember.

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，如“forget”应为“forgot”，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, many times. The most embarrassing time was when I forgot my ID card while getting off the train, which caused me to miss an important trip.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础，使用完整句子，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

예시: There are many things to remember daily, like what to buy when shopping and the tasks I need to complete at work.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法和用词小错误，如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”，且句子结构可以更自然。建议注意冠词使用和句子流畅性。

예시: I usually make a to-do list on my smartphone app because it's efficient, easy to update, and convenient to check.

× Not really, I'm not good at the memorial, you know, sometimes frequently forget something I'm planning to do.

✓ Not really, I'm not good at memorising, you know, sometimes I frequently forget something I'm planning to do.

这里'memorial'是名词，意思是纪念碑，应该用动名词'memorising'表示记忆的动作。

× So to avoid this I normally use a smartphone apps to make A to do list.

✓ So to avoid this I normally use a smartphone app to make a to-do list.

'apps'是复数，前面有不定冠词'a'，应改为单数'app'。

× The most embarrassing time is that one time I forget the ID card when I'm going to get down the train.

✓ The most embarrassing time was that one time I forgot the ID card when I was going to get off the train.

描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去时，'forget'改为'forgot'，'is'改为'was'。

× when I'm going to get down the train.

✓ when I was going to get off the train.

英语中表示下车用'get off'，'get down'用法不当。

× That's made me miss a very important traveling.

✓ That made me miss a very important trip.

'traveling'是动名词或形容词，名词应使用'trip'，且过去时态动词不需要助动词。

× Wow, there's so many things we need to remember, such as when we go shopping, what we planning to buy and when we working we need to planning and memorize.

✓ Wow, there are so many things we need to remember, such as when we go shopping, what we are planning to buy and when we are working we need to plan and memorize.

'there's'是there is的缩写，后面接复数名词应使用'there are'；'planning'和'working'前缺少be动词；'planning'应改为动词原形'plan'。

× Remember what's.

✓ (此句不完整，建议删除或补充完整)

该句不完整，缺少谓语，无法理解含义，建议删除或补充完整。

× Well, normally I'd like to make A to do list in my smartphone apps and it's very efficient, easy to keep updates and easy to check out.

✓ Well, normally I'd like to make a to-do list in my smartphone app and it's very efficient, easy to keep updated and easy to check.

'apps'应为单数'app'，'keep updates'应为'keep updated'，'check out'在此语境中用'check'更合适。