Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用简单句子说明原因。

예시: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often forget what I learn at school, especially English vocabulary.

제안: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，建议使用正确的时态，并且表达更自然。

예시: No, I have never forgotten something important because I always make a plan for my day.

제안: 回答内容不够具体且表达混乱，建议明确列举日常需要记住的具体事项，并用连词连接句子。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to complete my tasks, stay positive, never give up, and keep learning new things.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误，建议完整表达如何记忆重要事情，并使用连词使句子连贯。

예시: I remember important things by planning my day and prioritizing the most important tasks first.

× No, because I in the school I always forget the knowledge point and I English.

✓ No, because at school I always forget the knowledge points and English.

句子结构混乱，缺少介词'at'，且'nknowledge point'应为复数形式。应调整句子顺序使其更通顺。

× So I can't recalls the world.

✓ So I can't recall the words.

动词'recalls'与主语'I'不匹配，第一人称单数应使用'recall'。另外，'world'应为'words'，符合语境。

× No, because I have a plan what to do this day so I don't have forgotten something important.

✓ No, because I have a plan for what to do today, so I haven't forgotten anything important.

时态使用错误，'don't have forgotten'应为现在完成时的否定形式'haven't forgotten'。另外，'this day'应为'today'，并且句子结构需调整。

× I need to remember do everything I never say never and never give up and touching and learning. In daily life.

✓ I need to remember to do everything, never say never, never give up, keep touching and learning in daily life.

缺少不定式'to'，'remember do'应为'remember to do'。'touching'用法不当，应为'keep touching'或改为其他表达。句子断句不合理，需调整。

× And I will plan what you do for the day. So important things first.

✓ I will plan what to do for the day, so I do important things first.

句子结构不完整，'what you do'应为'what to do'，并且两个句子应合并为一个完整句子。