Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I can easily remember numbers and math-related information because I am a math teacher and I find numbers interesting.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý hợp lý hơn. Hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn về việc quên những gì và cách bạn xử lý.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things many times, such as appointments and meetings. Fortunately, I use my phone to set reminders, so it helps me remember on time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn còn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ thừa như 'uh' và sắp xếp ý theo trình tự logic, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt trách nhiệm và các việc cần nhớ.

예시: I need to remember several things every day. First, I have to remember the time I practice English with my partner. Second, I have many responsibilities assigned by my principal, so I must keep track of them carefully.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh lặp từ và dùng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích cách bạn sử dụng công cụ hỗ trợ nhớ một cách mạch lạc và chính xác.

예시: I usually write important things on my phone. For example, I use a calendar app that reminds me of important meetings, whether they are online or in person.

× Absolutely no.

✓ Absolutely not.

The phrase 'Absolutely no' is incorrect because 'no' is a determiner or adverb used to negate nouns, but here a negative adverb is needed to negate the statement. 'Absolutely not' is the correct form to express a strong negative response.

× I am a sharp memorized person so I don't I cannot remember anything for a long time.

✓ I am a sharp memorizing person so I cannot remember anything for a long time.

The word 'memorized' is the past participle and incorrectly used as an adjective here. The correct form is 'memorizing' to describe a person who memorizes sharply. Also, 'I don't I cannot' is redundant; 'I cannot' suffices.

× I can I just remember something related math or number and something I so impressive because I am a math teacher so I like number.

✓ I can just remember something related to math or numbers and something so impressive because I am a math teacher and I like numbers.

'Number' should be plural 'numbers' when referring to the general concept. Also, 'related math' needs the preposition 'to' as 'related to math'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× So many time in my life I always don't remember something related.

✓ So many times in my life I always don't remember something related.

The word 'time' should be plural 'times' when referring to multiple occasions.

× Appointment and meeting something I I forgot the time of meeting and I have to rewind it on my phone.

✓ Appointments and meetings, sometimes I forget the time of the meeting and I have to check it on my phone.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Appointment and meeting something' is incorrect; it should be plural 'appointments and meetings'. 'Rewind it on my phone' is incorrect; 'check it on my phone' is appropriate.

× My phone can remind it on time.

✓ My phone can remind me on time.

The verb 'remind' requires an object pronoun (me) rather than 'it'. 'Remind me on time' is correct usage.

× There are so many thing I have to remember every day.

✓ There are so many things I have to remember every day.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' when referring to multiple items.

× I have to remember the time I practice English with my partner.

✓ I have to remember the time when I practice English with my partner.

The sentence is missing the conjunction 'when' to connect the time clause properly.

× I have to, uh, responsibility so many things with my principal.

✓ I have to take responsibility for many things with my principal.

'Responsibility' is a noun and needs a verb like 'take' to form a correct phrase. Also, 'so many things' should be 'many things'. The preposition 'for' is required after 'responsibility'.

× So I have to remind it.

✓ So I have to remind myself.

The verb 'remind' requires an object; 'remind it' is incorrect. The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is appropriate here.

× As I mentioned it before, I write down it on my telephone.

✓ As I mentioned before, I write it down on my telephone.

'Mentioned it before' is incorrect; 'mentioned before' is correct. Also, 'write down it' should be 'write it down'.

× For example, I download an important app this called my calendar and this app will remind me some important meeting.

✓ For example, I downloaded an important app called My Calendar and this app will remind me of some important meetings.

'Download' should be past tense 'downloaded' to match the context. 'This called my calendar' is incorrect; it should be 'called My Calendar'. 'Remind me some important meeting' requires the preposition 'of' and plural 'meetings'.

× Yeah, even though online meeting and offline meeting is so excited.

✓ Yeah, even though online meetings and offline meetings are so exciting.

'Meeting' should be plural 'meetings'. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject. 'Excited' is an adjective describing a person; 'exciting' describes the meetings.