Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is quite long and a bit unclear. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then briefly explaining your method of remembering things. Also, avoid grammatical errors like 'I am not a person who able to memorize'.

예시: Honestly, I am not very good at memorising things. So, I usually write important notes on my phone or in a small diary that I carry with me.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer clearly by stating the event, reason, and time. Use linking words like 'because' or 'due to' properly and avoid unclear phrases like 'hack text dual'.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, two months ago, I missed my dentist appointment because it coincided with my exam period.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more coherent by using linking words like 'so' or 'then'. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and incorrect phrases like 'Or yes you're not'.

예시: As a student, I need to remember my daily tasks. So, every morning, I make a to-do list and at night, I check it to see if I have completed all my tasks.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Also, explain briefly how the app helps you remember important things.

예시: As I said earlier, I am not good at remembering important things. Therefore, I write them down in a note-taking app on my phone, which reminds me about them when needed.

× To be honestly, I am not a person who able to memorize things because my memory is not able to learn things that I write important things in my life in my phone and I make notes on my little diary that I bring all the time with me.

✓ To be honest, I am not a person who is able to memorize things because my memory is not good at learning things. I write important things in my life on my phone and I make notes in my little diary that I always carry with me.

The phrase 'To be honestly' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'To be honest'. Also, 'write important things in my life in my phone' should use the preposition 'on' for devices, so 'on my phone'. Similarly, 'make notes on my little diary' should be 'in my little diary' because notes are made inside a diary. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.

× To be honestly, I am not a person who able to memorize things because my memory is not able to learn things that I write important things in my life in my phone and I make notes on my little diary that I bring all the time with me.

✓ To be honest, I am not a person who is able to memorize things because my memory is not good at learning things. I write important things in my life on my phone and I make notes in my little diary that I always carry with me.

The phrase 'who able to memorize' is missing the verb 'is' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. The correct form is 'who is able to memorize'. This is a singular and plural issue where the verb must agree with the singular subject.

× To be honestly, I am not a person who able to memorize things because my memory is not able to learn things that I write important things in my life in my phone and I make notes on my little diary that I bring all the time with me.

✓ To be honest, I am not a person who is able to memorize things because my memory is not good at learning things. I write important things in my life on my phone and I make notes in my little diary that I always carry with me.

The phrase 'my memory is not able to learn things that I write' is awkward and incorrect in present tense usage. It should be 'my memory is not good at learning things'. This corrects the present tense usage and improves clarity.

× Yeah, so it's my anytime when I forget important in my life.

✓ Yeah, it happens anytime when I forget something important in my life.

The original sentence uses 'it's my anytime' which is incorrect. The phrase should be 'it happens anytime' to correctly express the occurrence. Also, 'forget important' is incomplete; it should be 'forget something important'. The past tense issue is with the verb usage and sentence structure.

× As far as I can remember, it was the matter of two months ago when I missed my appointment with my dentist because it was the time of my exams due to my hack text dual.

✓ As far as I can remember, it was about two months ago when I missed my appointment with my dentist because it was the time of my exams due to my hectic schedule.

The phrase 'the matter of two months ago' is incorrect; it should be 'about two months ago'. Also, 'hack text dual' seems to be a mispronunciation or error; the correct phrase is 'hectic schedule'. These corrections fix past tense and vocabulary errors.

× Well now I'm a student, I need to remember my task that I do in my whole day.

✓ Well, now I'm a student, I need to remember the tasks that I do throughout my whole day.

The phrase 'my task that I do in my whole day' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'the tasks that I do throughout my whole day' to correctly express habitual present tense actions and plural form.

× I make a list in my morning time to complete my task over the day.

✓ I make a list in the morning to complete my tasks during the day.

The phrase 'in my morning time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the morning'. Also, 'over the day' should be 'during the day' to correctly express the time period. Prepositions must be used correctly for clarity.

× I make a list in my morning time to complete my task over the day.

✓ I make a list in the morning to complete my tasks during the day.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple things to be done. This is a singular and plural issue.

× In night I try to complete all the task and I check my list that's I complete my task.

✓ At night, I try to complete all the tasks and I check my list to see that I have completed my tasks.

The phrase 'In night' is incorrect; it should be 'At night'. Also, 'that's I complete my task' is incorrect; it should be 'to see that I have completed my tasks'. This corrects preposition and present perfect tense usage.

× Or yes you're not.

✓ Or not, yes.

The phrase 'Or yes you're not' is unclear and incorrect in pronoun usage. It seems to be an incomplete or incorrect response. A clearer expression would be 'Or not, yes' or simply 'Or not'. Pronouns must be used correctly to convey meaning.

× Well I mentioned in above question I am not good at to remember important things.

✓ Well, I mentioned in the above question that I am not good at remembering important things.

The phrase 'mentioned in above question' should be 'mentioned in the above question' to correctly use the definite article. Also, 'not good at to remember' is incorrect; it should be 'not good at remembering' because 'good at' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Prepositions and verb forms must be used correctly.

× Well I mentioned in above question I am not good at to remember important things.

✓ Well, I mentioned in the above question that I am not good at remembering important things.

After the phrase 'good at', the verb should be in the -ing form (gerund). Therefore, 'to remember' is incorrect and should be 'remembering'.

× That's why I I write down the important things in my life in my mobile phone because it is the app on my mobile that Remember Me all the things in my life that I made on that Apple.

✓ That's why I write down the important things in my life on my mobile phone because there is an app on my mobile that reminds me of all the things in my life that I have saved on that app.

The preposition 'in my mobile phone' should be 'on my mobile phone' because we use 'on' for devices. Also, 'Remember Me' should be 'reminds me' to correctly use the verb. 'Made on that Apple' is incorrect; it should be 'saved on that app'. Prepositions and verb forms must be used correctly for clarity.