Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and improve natural phrasing. For example, instead of repeating 'memorizing things' multiple times, you can use pronouns or synonyms. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising. I usually categorize information by colours, shapes, or sizes, which helps me remember better. This method has proven very effective for me.

제안: There are some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb forms (e.g., 'forgot' instead of 'have forgot') and avoid sentence fragments. Also, provide more specific details and link your ideas coherently.

예시: Yes, I once forgot to attend an important meeting held by the Student Association. It was in the morning, and I arrived late, so the chief executive scolded me for being irresponsible.

제안: Your answer covers relevant points but can be improved by using linking words and more natural expressions. Also, avoid listing too many items without elaboration. Try to group related ideas and explain briefly.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember various things. For example, I have to wake up on time and plan my meals. Besides that, I often review math formulas and English vocabulary to keep my knowledge fresh.

제안: Good use of specific methods. To improve, avoid repetition ('in in') and use more natural phrasing. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I usually jot down important things on a piece of paper or type them into my online schedule. Additionally, I set alarms to remind myself so that I don't miss anything important.

× I have forgot something important.

✓ I have forgotten something important.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'have' we need the past participle form 'forgotten' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× One time I forgot to attend an important meeting which is held by the Student Association. In the morning.

✓ One time I forgot to attend an important meeting which was held by the Student Association in the morning.

The sentence is fragmented and the tense of 'is held' should be past 'was held' to match the past event. Also, 'In the morning.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence.

× I was late and I was scolded by the chief executive of the.

✓ I was late and I was scolded by the chief executive of the Student Association.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the object after 'chief executive of the'. Adding 'Student Association' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× I have my own way in memorizing things and I find it very useful.

✓ I have my own way of memorizing things and I find it very useful.

The correct preposition after 'way' is 'of' not 'in'. 'Way of doing something' is the standard expression.

× I will try to jot it down in a piece of paper or type it in in my online schedule book.

✓ I will try to jot it down on a piece of paper or type it in my online schedule book.

The correct preposition with 'a piece of paper' is 'on', not 'in'. Also, 'in in' is redundant; only one 'in' is needed before 'my online schedule book'.

× Maybe I will set some alarms to make myself remember those important things and do not miss it.

✓ Maybe I will set some alarms to help me remember those important things and not miss them.

'Make myself remember' is unnatural; 'help me remember' is better. Also, 'do not miss it' should be 'not miss them' to agree with plural 'things'.