Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言稍显简单且有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并且可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things in my daily life. For instance, I often forget important dates like my friends' birthdays or deadlines for tasks, which sometimes causes me trouble.

제안: 回答中有语法和用词错误，如“surprising”应为“surprised”，表达不够自然。建议注意时态和形容词的正确使用，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, last year I forgot my friend's birthday party until she called me to ask where I was. At first, I was surprised, but then I felt very embarrassed.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够清晰。建议注意单复数一致，避免重复，并且用更具体的细节来丰富答案。

예시: There are many things I need to remember daily, such as important study tasks and the schedule of my school courses.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免断句，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually set reminders or write down important notes. I also use the calendar app on my phone, which helps me remember things effectively.

× I was very surprising at first, but finally I felt embarrassing.

✓ I was very surprised at first, but finally I felt embarrassed.

The verbs 'surprising' and 'embarrassing' are present participles used as adjectives to describe something that causes a feeling. Here, the student wants to express their own feelings, so the past participle forms 'surprised' and 'embarrassed' should be used instead to indicate the emotions experienced.

× Oh, there are a number of things I need to remember, for example an important tasks of my study or some some courses for school.

✓ Oh, there are a number of things I need to remember, for example important tasks of my study or some courses for school.

The phrase 'an important tasks' mixes singular article 'an' with plural noun 'tasks'. The article should be removed to match the plural noun. Also, the repeated word 'some' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'some'.

× For me, setting reminders or write down the important sentence is very helpful.

✓ For me, setting reminders or writing down important sentences is very helpful.

When using 'or' to connect two verbs acting as subjects, they should be in the same form. 'Setting' is a gerund, so 'write' should be changed to 'writing' to maintain parallel structure. Also, 'sentence' should be plural 'sentences' to match the context of multiple important things.

× I will. I would set calendar in my phone so I think it's help a lot.

✓ I will. I would set a calendar on my phone, so I think it helps a lot.

The phrase 'set calendar' needs an article 'a' before 'calendar'. The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to a phone. 'It's help' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding a comma before 'so'.