Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答自然且内容相关，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达“forget”和“struggle with remembering”，并且可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget where I put my keys and have difficulty remembering names and English words. Therefore, I rely heavily on reminders to keep track of important items.

제안: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复“important things”。

예시: To be honest, I rarely forget important things because I write everything down in a planner and set reminders on my phone, which help me stay organized and on top of my tasks.

제안: 回答内容具体且相关，但句子之间缺少连接词，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时可以合并部分句子避免断裂。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedules and assignment deadlines because missing them could lead to poor grades, so it's crucial for me to stay organized.

제안: 回答内容具体且相关，但句子较短且缺少连接词，建议合并句子并使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I prefer using technology to remember important tasks; for example, I often set reminders and alarms on my smartphone and use apps like a to-do list to keep track of deadlines.

× I rely highly on reminders to keep track of important things for me.

✓ I rely heavily on reminders to keep track of important things for me.

这里“rely highly on”是不正确的搭配，正确的表达是“rely heavily on”，表示“非常依赖”。“highly”通常修饰形容词或副词，而“heavily”修饰动词，表示程度。

× I also use apps like A to do list to help me keep track of the deadlines.

✓ I also use apps like a to-do list to help me keep track of the deadlines.

“A to do list”中缺少冠词“a”，且“to do list”应写作“to-do list”，表示“待办事项列表”。冠词“a”用于表示泛指一个待办事项列表。