Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答内容较为完整，表达了自己的观点并给出了具体的应对方法，但语言表达上有些小错误，如“A to do list”应为“a to-do list”，且句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议注意冠词的使用和句子连贯性，避免重复表达。

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often forget details. To cope with this, I set reminders on my phone and keep a to-do list nearby, which helps me stay organized and avoid missing important tasks.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“mistakenly remember”应为“mistakenly remembered”，且时态不一致。表达情感时“feel so stressful”应改为“I felt very stressed”。建议加强时态一致性和情感表达的准确性。

예시: Yes, I have. During my sophomore year in college, I mistakenly remembered the wrong time for a midterm exam. I thought it was at 10, but it was actually at 9, so I arrived late and felt very stressed.

제안: 回答内容具体，但表达略显重复和不够简洁，如“the other one is that I have to remind myself”可以更简练。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I need to remember many things daily. For instance, I have to keep track of meeting times to be punctual, and also remind myself to buy necessary items before going home.

제안: 回答简洁明了，但“add the calendar”表达不准确，应为“add it to the calendar”。建议注意介词的使用，使表达更地道自然。

예시: I usually use Google Calendar or the notes app on my phone. For example, when I receive information about a meeting, I add it to my calendar to ensure I am punctual.

× I usually set reminders on my phone or keep A to do list nearby so I can check it whenever necessary.

✓ I usually set reminders on my phone or keep a to-do list nearby so I can check it whenever necessary.

这里的“a to do list”中的“a”应该是小写，且“to do list”应连字符连接为“to-do list”，表示“待办事项列表”。文章中冠词使用错误，需改为小写且正确拼写。

× Yes I have, during my sophomore year in college I mistakenly remember the wrong time for midterm.

✓ Yes, I have. During my sophomore year in college, I mistakenly remembered the wrong time for the midterm.

这里描述过去发生的事情，动词“remember”应使用过去式“remembered”。此外，句子中缺少逗号，且“midterm”前应加定冠词“the”。

× I thought it was scheduled for 10 and it was actually 9 so I ended up arriving late and I feel so stressful.

✓ I thought it was scheduled for 10, but it was actually at 9, so I ended up arriving late and I felt so stressed.

描述过去事件时，动词时态应保持一致，故“feel”应改为过去式“felt”。“stressful”是形容词，表示“令人紧张的”，此处应使用形容词“stressed”表示“感到压力”。另外，句子中缺少逗号和连词“but”。

× and the other one is that I have to remind myself to buy necessary items before going home.

✓ and the other thing is that I have to remind myself to buy necessary items before going home.

“the other one”在此处指代“另一件事”，应使用“the other thing”更合适，量词使用不当。

× I usually use Google Calendar or the notes in my phone.

✓ I usually use Google Calendar or the notes on my phone.

“notes”与“phone”搭配时，正确的介词是“on”，表示“在手机上”，而不是“in”。