Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复用词，且表达不够流畅自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

예시: It depends. I'm not very good at memorizing words or sentences. When I was young, I struggled with memorizing poems. However, I find it easier to remember logical information or graphs because they make sense to me.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，且表达略显简单。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免重复，并丰富细节使表达更具体。

예시: Yes, last year I was struggling with my graduate dissertation. I often stayed up late and felt really exhausted, so I forgot my best friend's birthday. I felt very regretful about that.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的时态和动词形式，并适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: I need to remember a lot of information daily because I'm a postgraduate student. I have to work on many academic projects, write papers, conduct experiments, and prepare for exams or complete summer assignments.

제안: 回答较为简洁且表达清晰，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使回答更丰富自然。

예시: If something is really important to me, I usually write it down on my phone and set an alarm to remind me at a specific time. This method helps me stay organized and not forget important tasks.

× When I was very young I'm really struggled with memories, poems, but for some logical information or graphs I'm really good at memories that it makes sense.

✓ When I was very young I really struggled with memorizing poems, but for some logical information or graphs I'm really good at memorizing because it makes sense.

句子中“I'm really struggled”时态混用，应为过去时“I really struggled”。另外，“memories”应改为动名词“memorizing”以表达记忆动作。

× When I was very young I'm really struggled with memories, poems, but for some logical information or graphs I'm really good at memories that it makes sense.

✓ When I was very young I really struggled with memorizing poems, but for some logical information or graphs I'm really good at memorizing because it makes sense.

“memories”应使用动名词形式“memorizing”，表示记忆的动作。

× At that time, I often stayed up late and feel feel really exhausted so that I forget my best friend's birthday.

✓ At that time, I often stayed up late and felt really exhausted so I forgot my best friend's birthday.

句子中“feel feel”重复且时态错误，应为过去时“felt”。“forget”应为过去时“forgot”，与上下文时间一致。

× Yeah, I need to remember a huge amount of information in my daily life because I'm a post graduate student.

✓ Yeah, I need to remember a huge amount of information in my daily life because I'm a postgraduate student.

“post graduate”应合并为“postgraduate”，表示“研究生”的正确写法。

× I have do a lot of academic projects, writing academic paper and do some experiments and sometimes also I have some course I have prepared for the examination or finish summer assignment.

✓ I have to do a lot of academic projects, write academic papers, do some experiments, and sometimes I also have courses I need to prepare for the examination or finish summer assignments.

句子结构混乱，缺少助动词“to”在“have to do”，动词形式不一致，应统一使用动词原形或名词复数形式。

× Well, if The thing is really important to me, I'd like to write it on my phone and set an alarm to remind me at a specific time.

✓ Well, if the thing is really important to me, I'd like to write it in my phone and set an alarm to remind me at a specific time.

“write on my phone”应改为“write in my phone”，表示在手机里记录信息。