Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和用词不当。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇表达记忆的好坏。

예시: It depends on the situation. If something is important, I can remember it for a long time, but I tend to forget things that are not very important quickly.

제안: 回答不完整且重复，缺乏细节和连贯性。建议补充更多细节，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, once I forgot my best friend's birthday and didn't prepare a gift. I felt really sorry and apologized to her later.

제안: 回答较为完整，但句子连接不够自然，部分表达不准确。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法准确性。

예시: There are many things I need to remember daily. For example, I have to remember the start time of my classes and the deadlines for my homework. Also, I need to add fish oil to my dog's meal.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和用词不当。建议简化句子结构，注意语法，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: There are many ways to remember important things, but I usually set reminders on my phone and check them regularly so I don't forget.

× but if it abides memory I would forget it as soon as possible.

✓ but if it is an abiding memory, I would forget it as soon as possible.

这里应使用形容词形式来修饰memory，原句中'abides'是动词形式，错误地用作形容词。应改为'abiding'，表示持续的记忆。

× Yes, once I forgot the birthday of my best friend and didn't prepare the birthday gift for her.

✓ Yes, once I forgot my best friend's birthday and didn't prepare a birthday gift for her.

表达中应使用过去时态'forgot'和'didn't prepare'，这里时态正确，但表达更自然的方式是使用所有格'my best friend's birthday'，并且冠词使用'a birthday gift'更合适。

× And and and then.

✓ And then.

句子中重复使用'and'三次，造成结构混乱，应简化为'And then'，使句子结构清晰。

× And I need to remember add fish oil to my dog meal.

✓ And I need to remember to add fish oil to my dog's meal.

动词'remember'后应接不定式'to add'，表示记得去做某事；另外，'dog meal'应使用所有格'dog's meal'表示狗的食物。

× and always check them to make me don't forget.

✓ and always check them so that I don't forget.

原句中'make me don't forget'结构错误，应使用连词'so that'引导目的状语从句，且主语应为'I'，谓语为'don't forget'。