Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和冗余，句子结构应更自然流畅。例如，避免重复使用“good memory”和“remember”，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I have a good memory. For instance, I can easily recall important historical events and the faces of people I've met. Additionally, I regularly play memory games and solve puzzles in my free time, which helps improve my memory retention.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，应注意时态一致和句子完整。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并具体说明如何使用提醒工具。

예시: Yes, once I forgot my friend's birthday, which made me feel very frustrated and guilty. I apologized and promised to make it up to them. Since then, I have started using reminders, like writing notes or setting alarms, to remember important dates.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，句子较长且不够连贯。建议分句表达，使用连接词，并具体说明活动内容。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my exercise and meal times, as well as when to take my medicine. Besides that, I also have to keep track of my coursework, workshops, meetings, and social activities with friends and family.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和句子不完整，应注意句子结构完整，避免重复“and”，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually remember important things by writing them down in my notebook or on sticky notes placed in visible spots. Additionally, I set reminder notifications and use calendar apps on my phone, which is very convenient and flexible.

× I always practice on memory games and puzzles during my free time, which can increase my memory retention ability and also.

✓ I always practice memory games and puzzles during my free time, which can increase my memory retention ability.

动词practice后面不需要介词on，直接加名词作宾语。句末的"and also"多余，应删除。

× I made apologize and promise to make up for it a few days later.

✓ I apologized and promised to make up for it a few days later.

这里需要用过去式，动词apologize和promise应改为过去式apologized和promised。

× It remind me of remember some important thing using the reminder also, such as writing down or using memory.

✓ It reminds me to remember some important things using reminders, such as writing things down or using memory aids.

主语It是第三人称单数，动词remind应加s变为reminds。动词remember前应使用不定式to remember。"some important thing"应为复数some important things。"using memory"表达不清，改为using memory aids更准确。

× I need need to remember the attend the course work, workshop, meeting and some other activity with my friend or family gatherings and.

✓ I need to remember to attend coursework, workshops, meetings, and some other activities with my friends or family gatherings.

course work应写为coursework（不可数）或courses，workshop、meeting、activity应使用复数形式。friend应为friends。句中重复need需删除。

× I need need to remember the attend the course work, workshop, meeting and some other activity with my friend or family gatherings and.

✓ I need to remember to attend coursework, workshops, meetings, and some other activities with my friends or family gatherings.

动词remember后应接不定式to attend，而不是the attend。

× And also I set some reminder notification and using the calendar apps to do lists on my phone, which is more convenient and flexible and.

✓ And also I set some reminder notifications and use calendar apps to make to-do lists on my phone, which is more convenient and flexible.

动词set后应接名词reminder notifications，动词use应与set并列，不能用using。to do lists应为to-do lists。句末"and"多余，应删除。