Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以尝试用简单句子直接说明短期记忆好，长期记忆困难，并举一个具体例子。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things in the short term. For example, if someone tells me their phone number, I can remember it quickly for a day or two. However, I find it difficult to remember information for a long time.

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且缺乏细节。建议直接回答问题，说明忘记了什么重要的事情，并简要描述当时的情景和感受。使用连词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important. When I was 18, my mother gave me my first credit card, but I forgot the card number soon after. It was quite embarrassing and inconvenient.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构和语法有待改进。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并用连词连接句子，使回答更流畅。

예시: I need to remember my daily plans. Every morning, I like to write down what I should do today and tomorrow, and then I follow my plan carefully.

제안: 回答内容有趣，但表达不够自然，语法和句子结构需要改进。建议用更地道的英语表达习语，并说明写下来帮助记忆的原因。

예시: There is a Chinese saying that writing things down is better than just memorising them. So, I usually write important things in my diary to help me remember them.

× Actually, I'm really good at short memorizing things.

✓ Actually, I'm really good at short-term memorizing things.

这里需要使用复合形容词“short-term”来修饰“memorizing things”，而不是直接用动名词“memorizing”前加“short”。

× For example, if you told me you're not, you tell me your number now I I can remember it very fast and just one day I have to regularly.

✓ For example, if you tell me your number now, I can remember it very fast, but after just one day, I have to review it regularly.

原句结构混乱，时态不一致，且表达不清晰。需要调整句子结构，使条件句和主句时态一致，表达更连贯。

× Uh, yes, I remembered when I was 18 years old, my mom gave me my first credit card my life.

✓ Uh, yes, I remember when I was 18 years old, my mom gave me my first credit card in my life.

“remembered”应改为现在时“remember”，因为这里表达的是对过去事件的记忆，通常用现在时。

× And then however, I forgot my credit card number.

✓ However, I forgot my credit card number.

“And then however”重复且不合适，应去掉“and then”，只用“however”连接句子。

× Oh, it's hard to say. So it's bad thing.

✓ Oh, it's hard to say. So it's a bad thing.

“bad thing”前缺少冠词“a”，因为“thing”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。

× I need to remember my daily life plan every day.

✓ I need to remember my daily plan every day.

“daily life plan”表达不自然，通常说“daily plan”即可，且“daily life”不用于修饰“plan”。

× I have a habit that I would like to make a plan in morning to write down what I should do these day, what I should do tomorrow.

✓ I have a habit of making a plan in the morning to write down what I should do these days and what I should do tomorrow.

“have a habit that I would like to make”表达不自然，应改为“have a habit of making”。“in morning”缺少冠词，应为“in the morning”。“these day”应为复数“these days”。

× Yeah, and I will do it. Follow my plan. This is I.

✓ Yeah, and I will follow my plan. That's how I do it.

“Follow my plan.”是一个不完整的句子，应与前句合并或改为完整句。最后一句“This is I.”表达不清，应改为更自然的表达。

× In China has the idiom sentence is writing down your important things is better than you just memorize it in your head.

✓ In China, there is an idiom that says writing down important things is better than just memorizing them in your head.

原句缺少主语和谓语，结构混乱。需要补充“there is”，调整句子结构，使其完整且通顺。

× So I think I would like to write down the important things in my diary book to remember that.

✓ So I think I would like to write down important things in my diary to remember them.

“diary book”重复，通常只用“diary”。“remember that”中的“that”指代不明，应改为“them”指代“important things”。