Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为简单，缺乏连贯性和丰富细节。建议使用连接词使回答更流畅，并提供具体例子说明记忆能力。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, in high school, I often memorised Chinese poems quickly, which helped me perform well in exams.

제안: 语法和表达存在错误，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达，并增加细节说明如何防止遗忘。

예시: I hardly ever forget important things because I usually make a plan in my notebook, so I can check it whenever necessary.

제안: 回答不够自然，表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并具体说明需要记住的物品及原因。

예시: It depends on where I am. If I stay at home, I don't need to remember much, but when I go out, I always remember to bring my power bank and facial tissues to stay comfortable.

제안: 表达不清晰且有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，并具体说明记忆方法。

예시: I usually make plans in my notebook and stick notes on my textbook so I can check them whenever I need to remember important things.

× In order to prevent me to forget something, I usually make a plan to in my pad so I can check them whenever I need, which help me remember what things I need to do.

✓ In order to prevent me from forgetting something, I usually make a plan in my pad so I can check it whenever I need, which helps me remember what things I need to do.

介词用法错误，动词不定式to forget应改为介词短语prevent sb from doing sth中的动名词forgetting；另外，'help'应与主语'which'保持单数一致，改为'helps'。建议记住固定搭配prevent sb from doing sth，并注意主谓一致。

× Actually depends on where I stay.

✓ It actually depends on where I stay.

句子缺少主语，应加上it作为形式主语。建议写完整句子，避免省略主语。

× If I just stay at home it has nothing to remember, but if I go out I must take my power bank and facial tissues in my back so I can stay outside.

✓ If I just stay at home, there is nothing to remember, but if I go out I must take my power bank and facial tissues in my bag so I can stay outside.

'it has nothing to remember'中'it'指代不明，应改为'there is nothing to remember'；另外，'in my back'应为'in my bag'，这里是词汇错误。建议注意固定表达和词汇搭配。

× As I am considered, I must makes plans in my notebook and will widen in a paper stick in my text so I can check them anytime I need.

✓ As I am considered, I must make plans in my notebook and will write them on a paper stick in my text so I can check them anytime I need.

动词'makes'应为'make'，因为主语'I'对应动词原形；'widen'用词错误，应为'write'；'in a paper stick in my text'表达不清，改为'on a paper stick in my text'更合适。建议注意主谓一致和词汇准确使用。