Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, instead of 'because of my lessons character', you could say 'because of the nature of my studies'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because of the nature of my studies. I make an effort to learn new information promptly, which really helps me, especially with my university coursework.

제안: Your answer is a bit repetitive and could be clearer. Try to avoid phrases like 'in my opinion' when the question asks for personal experience. Also, use linking words to improve coherence and be more specific about what you forgot.

예시: Yes, sometimes when I am very excited before important exams or university ceremonies, I tend to forget some things like my notes or schedule. However, I have never forgotten anything truly important so far.

제안: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to respond directly by stating what you need to remember daily, and avoid vague or incomplete sentences. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'in my opinion' unless expressing an opinion.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks like appointments, deadlines, and important phone numbers to stay organised and efficient.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I usually write in my notebook or use my phone's notes app to remember important things.'

예시: I usually write important information in my notebook or use the notes app on my phone to make sure I don't forget anything important.

× Yes sure, I am really good at memorizing things because of my lessons character.

✓ Yes, sure, I am really good at memorizing things because of my lesson's character.

The phrase 'lessons character' is incorrect because 'lessons' should be possessive to indicate the character belonging to the lesson. The correct form is 'lesson's character'. Also, a comma is needed after 'Yes' for correct punctuation.

× I try to memorize new things on time.

✓ I try to memorize new things in time.

The preposition 'on time' is used for punctuality, while 'in time' means before a deadline or before it is too late. Here, 'in time' is the correct preposition to express memorizing before needed.

× Well, in my opinion, if I am so excited ahead of my crucial exams or ceremonies from the university, yes of course I forgot many crucial things, but I have never forgotten something important so far.

✓ Well, in my opinion, if I am so excited before my crucial exams or ceremonies at the university, yes, of course I have forgotten many crucial things, but I have never forgotten something important so far.

The preposition 'ahead of' is less common and 'before' is more natural here. Also, 'from the university' should be 'at the university' to indicate location. Additionally, the past tense 'forgot' should be present perfect 'have forgotten' to match 'so far'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Well, in my opinion, in order to remember well and the person should sleep enough because the sleep plays a crucial role to memorize it.

✓ Well, in my opinion, in order to remember well, a person should sleep enough because sleep plays a crucial role in memorizing.

The phrase 'the person' is incorrect; 'a person' is more appropriate. 'The sleep' should be 'sleep' without 'the'. The phrase 'to memorize it' is incorrect; 'in memorizing' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, a comma is needed after 'remember well'.

× In the brain, well.

✓ Well, in the brain.

The phrase 'In the brain, well.' is awkward and misplaced. Starting with 'Well,' followed by 'in the brain' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Well, mostly I write my notebooks in order not forget it or my phone is always with me so that I use my phone notes to write it.

✓ Well, mostly I write in my notebooks in order not to forget it, or my phone is always with me so I use my phone notes to write it down.

The phrase 'write my notebooks' is incorrect; it should be 'write in my notebooks'. The phrase 'not forget it' requires 'to' after 'not'. Also, 'phone notes' should be 'phone's notes' or 'notes on my phone', but 'phone notes' is acceptable informally. Added 'down' after 'write it' for completeness. Commas added for clarity.