Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免重复，并且回答时尽量简洁明了。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, last week I remembered a story clearly and was able to describe it to my teacher.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，避免语法错误，并且补充更多细节使回答更完整。

예시: Yes, I once forgot an important exam last week. It was a Chinese exam, and unfortunately, I missed it because I forgot the date.

제안: 回答中语法和句子结构错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议理清句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并且避免重复。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember where my clothes and books are. Also, I have to remember to go to school every day and find my classroom when I arrive.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually save important things on my phone. Sometimes, I also tell my friends or parents so they can help me remember.

× Yes, I good at memory thing things and last week I remembered a story and I can describe it clearly for my teacher.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorising things and last week I remembered a story and I can describe it clearly to my teacher.

原句中“thing things”是复数形式错误，应该使用复数形式“things”。另外，缺少动词“am”，应为“I am good”。“memory”用法不当，应改为动名词“memorising”。“describe it clearly for my teacher”中介词“for”应改为“to”。

× Yes I forgot my exam last week. I have a Chinese exams but I didn't go to there because I forgot it.

✓ Yes, I forgot my exam last week. I had a Chinese exam but I didn't go there because I forgot it.

“have”应使用过去时“had”以匹配时间“last week”。“exams”应为单数“exam”以匹配前文“my exam”。“go to there”中“to”多余，应去掉。

× Yes, I good at memory thing things and last week I remembered a story and I can describe it clearly for my teacher.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorising things and last week I remembered a story and I can describe it clearly to my teacher.

“good at”后应接动名词形式，故“memorising”替代“memory”。

× Yes, I good at memory thing things and last week I remembered a story and I can describe it clearly for my teacher.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorising things and last week I remembered a story and I can describe it clearly to my teacher.

“describe it clearly for my teacher”中介词“for”用法不当，应改为“to”。

× Yes I forgot my exam last week. I have a Chinese exams but I didn't go to there because I forgot it.

✓ Yes, I forgot my exam last week. I had a Chinese exam but I didn't go there because I forgot it.

“go to there”中“to”多余，应去掉。

× I need remember where is my clothes, where is my book, and I need a go to school every day so I need to remember it and I need to remember where's my classroom when I go to school.

✓ I need to remember where my clothes are, where my book is, and I need to go to school every day so I need to remember that and I need to remember where my classroom is when I go to school.

“need remember”缺少不定式“to”，应为“need to remember”。“where is my clothes”语序错误，陈述句应为“where my clothes are”。“a go”中冠词“a”多余，应去掉。

× I need remember where is my clothes, where is my book, and I need a go to school every day so I need to remember it and I need to remember where's my classroom when I go to school.

✓ I need to remember where my clothes are, where my book is, and I need to go to school every day so I need to remember that and I need to remember where my classroom is when I go to school.

“where's my classroom”中缩写不适合书面表达，且语序应调整为“where my classroom is”。

× I need remember where is my clothes, where is my book, and I need a go to school every day so I need to remember it and I need to remember where's my classroom when I go to school.

✓ I need to remember where my clothes are, where my book is, and I need to go to school every day so I need to remember that and I need to remember where my classroom is when I go to school.

“it”指代不明确，改为“that”更清晰。

× I remember it in my phone and or I can I can tell my friends or my parents they can help me remember it.

✓ I remember it on my phone, or I can tell my friends or my parents, and they can help me remember it.

“and or”连用不当，应选择“or”或“and”。“I can I can”重复，应去掉一个。句中缺少逗号以分隔句子。

× I remember it in my phone and or I can I can tell my friends or my parents they can help me remember it.

✓ I remember it on my phone, or I can tell my friends or my parents, and they can help me remember it.

“remember it in my phone”中介词应为“on”，表示在手机上。