Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific supporting details using correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and aim for coherence.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially at work. For example, I often forget small details unless I write them down or use reminders.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and proper sentence structure. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain the situation logically. Be specific about what happened and when.

예시: Yes, last week I forgot my wallet at home when I was on my way to work. Fortunately, I realized it quickly and went back to get it.

제안: Your response is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Start with a clear topic sentence about what you need to remember daily, then add specific details using linking words to explain why.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to manage my workload and time effectively so that I can complete difficult tasks on schedule.

제안: Your answer is understandable but repetitive and lacks fluency. Use a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating words. Add specific details about how you use your phone for reminders.

예시: I usually use my phone's reminder app to help me remember important things. It sends notifications so I don't forget my tasks.

× I think I quite couldn't memorize anything because of I'm easy to memorize, memorize things.

✓ I think I couldn't quite memorize anything because I'm not good at memorizing things.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions and has awkward phrasing. 'Because of I'm easy to memorize' is incorrect; 'because' should be followed by a clause, not 'because of' here. Also, 'easy to memorize' is incorrect; it should be 'not good at memorizing'. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes, last week I was when I'm go to work, I was I forgot my wallet in my room.

✓ Yes, last week when I was going to work, I forgot my wallet in my room.

The original sentence has incorrect tense usage and word order. 'I was when I'm go to work' is ungrammatical. The correct past continuous form is 'when I was going to work'. Also, 'I was I forgot' is redundant and incorrect. The correction uses proper past tense and word order.

× So when I realized on on the way.

✓ So I realized it on the way.

The phrase 'realized on on the way' is incorrect due to repeated preposition and missing object. 'Realized' requires an object (what was realized). The correction adds 'it' as the object and removes the repeated 'on'.

× In my daily I remind you manage my workload so and and remind to manage my time.

✓ In my daily life, I remind myself to manage my workload and my time.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'you' instead of 'myself' and has awkward phrasing. 'Remind you manage' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is needed. Also, 'In my daily' is incomplete; it should be 'In my daily life'.

× So how I can finish my hard task?

✓ So how can I finish my hard tasks?

The original sentence has incorrect word order for a question and uses singular 'task' awkwardly. The correct question form is 'How can I finish...?' and plural 'tasks' fits better for general workload.

× I usually use my phone to the reminders reminders so it will be it will do help for things to remind me.

✓ I usually use my phone for reminders because it helps remind me of things.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and has redundant words. 'Use my phone to the reminders' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for reminders'. Also, 'it will be it will do help' is awkward and redundant. The correction simplifies and clarifies the sentence.