Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，且句子较长不够简洁。建议使用简单明了的句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

예시: No, I am not good at memorising things. For example, once I went to the airport but forgot to bring my ID card, which was very inconvenient.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连词如“for example”或“such as”来组织句子，并注意语法准确。

예시: Yes, I often forget important things. For example, I have forgotten my ID card when taking a plane and sometimes I forget my keys, so I have to call my parents to help me.

제안: 回答中有重复和口语填充词，影响流畅度。建议减少“uh”、“umm”等填充词，句子结构更紧凑，内容更具体。

예시: I need to remember the time and my timetable because I am a student with many classes and activities like clubs. This helps me to be punctual and organized.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富词汇表达。建议使用“therefore”或“so”连接句子，并尝试使用同义词。

예시: Because I have a bad memory, I always write important things down in my notebook. Therefore, I check it every day to make sure I don't forget anything important.

× No, I have bad memory.

✓ No, I have a bad memory.

这里的memory是可数名词，表示记忆力时需要加冠词a，表示“一种记忆力”。

× I forget to forgot to bring my ID card.

✓ I forgot to bring my ID card.

这里使用过去时态forgot，不能同时用forget和forgot，重复且错误。应使用过去时forgot表示过去发生的动作。

× I always this this kind of things such as forget the ID card when I need to take an airplane, forget to bring the keys so that I can't open the door and need to have a phone call with my parents.

✓ I always forget these kinds of things such as forgetting the ID card when I need to take an airplane, forgetting to bring the keys so that I can't open the door and needing to have a phone call with my parents.

这里things应使用复数形式，this kind of things应改为these kinds of things。动词forget后接动名词形式表示习惯性动作。

× I always this this kind of things such as forget the ID card when I need to take an airplane, forget to bring the keys so that I can't open the door and need to have a phone call with my parents.

✓ I always forget these kinds of things such as forgetting the ID card when I need to take an airplane, forgetting to bring the keys so that I can't open the door and needing to have a phone call with my parents.

在列举多个动作时，动词应使用动名词形式（-ing）保持结构一致。

× I need to remember the time, umm, so that I won't leave for the class and I need to remember the timetable because I also have some kind of activities like clubs or something else.

✓ I need to remember the time, umm, so that I won't be late for the class and I need to remember the timetable because I also have some kinds of activities like clubs or something else.

这里表达“上课迟到”应使用be late for。activities应使用复数形式some kinds of activities。

× I also have some kind of activities like clubs or something else.

✓ I also have some kinds of activities like clubs or something else.

some kind of后面应接复数名词，表示多种类型的活动。

× I always write it down on my notebook and I will check my notebook every day so that I won't forget something important.

✓ I always write it down in my notebook and I check my notebook every day so that I won't forget something important.

write down后接介词in表示写在笔记本里。will check改为一般现在时check，表示习惯动作。