Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but very brief and could be more natural by adding a reason or example. Try to avoid repeating the same phrase 'memorizing things' twice. Also, use linking words to make your response more fluent.

예시: No, I am not very good at memorising things because I often get distracted easily, which makes it hard for me to remember details.

제안: Your answer is vague and unclear. Instead of saying 'something about it', specify what you forgot. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'many times' without context. Use linking words to explain why or what happened.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important appointments several times, especially when I am very busy with work or studies.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and lacks detail. Try to be more specific about what daily activities you need to remember and why. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I need to remember my daily activities, such as attending meetings and completing assignments, because they help me stay organised and meet deadlines.

제안: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more detail and using linking words. For example, explain why you use this method and how effective it is for you.

예시: I remember important things by marking them on paper, such as making lists or notes, because it helps me keep track and reduces the chance of forgetting.

× I remember important things by marking them on the paper.

✓ I remember important things by marking them on paper.

The use of 'the' before 'paper' is incorrect here because it refers to paper in general, not a specific piece of paper. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.