Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct verb forms and improve sentence clarity. Also, avoid redundancy and organise your ideas logically with linking words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples using connectors like 'for instance' or 'also'.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising different types of information. For instance, I can quickly remember phone numbers and people's names when I meet them for the first time.

제안: Focus on using correct tense and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly. Also, be more specific about what you forgot and why. Keep your answer concise and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times. For example, I once forgot to bring my homework and notebooks to school, which affected my practical exam preparation.

제안: Improve sentence coherence by using linking words like 'especially' and 'because'. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points. Try to be more specific about the habits you forget and why.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially to drink enough water and eat healthy food. However, I sometimes forget these habits because I do not keep a proper schedule or make notes.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'therefore' or 'also' to connect ideas smoothly. Be specific about your methods and explain briefly how they help you.

예시: I want to remember many things, so I usually write them down or set reminders on my phone or diary. Also, I call my mom to help me remember important tasks or events.

× Yes obviously I'm good at memorize to different type of things such as a number in the number I always capture the call number instantly and the second thing I always remember all the peoples name when I first time meet him or her. That's why I'm good at my.

✓ Yes obviously I'm good at memorizing different types of things such as numbers; I always capture the correct number instantly. The second thing is I always remember all the people's names when I first meet them. That's why I'm good at it.

The phrase 'good at memorize' is incorrect; after 'good at' the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'memorizing' is correct. Also, 'different type' should be plural 'different types' to match plural 'things' (Grammar problem type 1). 'A number in the number' is unclear and corrected to 'numbers'. 'Call number' corrected to 'correct number'. 'Peoples name' should be 'people's names' (possessive and plural). 'When I first time meet him or her' should be 'when I first meet them' for correct tense and pronoun usage.

× Yes, of course multiple times as I'm a student so that's why I sometimes forgot my homework or assignment completions notebooks in at at my at my home. I remember that our practical exam was held so I just forgot my all the books and practical work.

✓ Yes, of course, multiple times. As I'm a student, sometimes I forget my homework or assignment completion notebooks at my home. I remember that our practical exam was held, but I forgot all my books and practical work.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so 'forget' (present tense) is better for 'sometimes I forget'. 'Assignment completions notebooks' corrected to 'assignment completion notebooks'. Extra words 'in at at my at my' removed for clarity. 'I just forgot my all the books' corrected to 'I forgot all my books' for correct word order.

× Sometimes I forgot those important importance habit because I am not very good at making notes or keeping a schedule that's why I forgot many things in my.

✓ Sometimes I forget those important habits because I am not very good at making notes or keeping a schedule; that's why I forget many things.

'Importance habit' is incorrect; 'important habits' is correct adjective-noun order (Grammar problem type 18). 'Forgot' changed to 'forget' to match habitual action (present tense). The sentence ends abruptly with 'in my' which is incomplete and removed for clarity. The sentence is split for better structure.

× There are many things I things I want to remember, so I usually note down them or set reminders for it in my phone or in diary. And moreover I also call my mom to help me remember the particular things and the importance task or event.

✓ There are many things I want to remember, so I usually note them down or set reminders for them on my phone or in my diary. Moreover, I also call my mom to help me remember particular things and important tasks or events.

'Note down them' is incorrect; correct order is 'note them down'. 'Set reminders for it' should be 'set reminders for them' to agree with plural 'things'. 'In my phone or in diary' corrected to 'on my phone or in my diary' (preposition use). 'Importance task or event' corrected to 'important tasks or events' (adjective form and plural).