Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为简单且有语法错误，如“things that learn from the classes”应为“things that I learn from classes”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意主谓一致和时态。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember case laws for my studies and various details I learn in class. My friends often tell me that I have excellent memorising skills.

제안: 回答内容较好，但表达略显重复，如“like the schedule, like the money”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意时态一致。

예시: No, I have never forgotten anything important in my daily life because I always write down important things, such as schedules and payments that need to be made before their deadlines.

제안: 回答内容具体，但句子较长且缺少连接词，建议使用连接词如“and”或“as well as”使句子更连贯。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my parents' birthdays, my anniversary with my boyfriend, as well as the payments that must be made before their due dates.

제안: 回答不完整，最后一句话未表达完整意思，且表达不够自然。建议完整表达观点，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I usually use the notepad app on my mobile phone to write down important dates and tasks. This makes it easier for me to access the information and helps me avoid forgetting important things.

× My friends usually said that I have a very good memorizing skills.

✓ My friends usually said that I have very good memorizing skills.

skills 是复数名词，前面不需要加不定冠词 a。这里的错误是单复数搭配错误。

× My friends usually said that I have a very good memorizing skills.

✓ My friends usually say that I have very good memorizing skills.

usually 表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时 say，而不是过去时 said。

× No, I never forgot something important in the daily life.

✓ No, I have never forgotten something important in daily life.

never 与过去时 forgot 搭配不当，应该用现在完成时 have never forgotten 表示到目前为止的经历。

× I think it is because I always mark down all important things like the schedule, like the money to be paid before the deadline.

✓ I think it is because I always mark down all important things like the schedule and the money to be paid before the deadline.

like 后面列举多个例子时，应该用 and 连接，而不是重复使用 like。

× In my daily life I have to remember the birthday of my parents and the anniversary day with my boyfriend and also the money to be paid before the due dates.

✓ In my daily life I have to remember the birthdays of my parents and the anniversary day with my boyfriend and also the money to be paid before the due dates.

parents 是复数，birthday 应该用复数 birthdays。

× In my daily life I have to remember the birthday of my parents and the anniversary day with my boyfriend and also the money to be paid before the due dates.

✓ In my daily life I have to remember the birthdays of my parents, the anniversary day of my boyfriend and me, and also the money to be paid before the due dates.

anniversary day 应该用 of 来表示双方的纪念日，而不是 with。

× I usually use the notepad apps in my mobile to note down the important dates and the important things to be done.

✓ I usually use the notepad apps on my mobile to note down the important dates and the important things to be done.

表示设备时，应该用介词 on 而不是 in。

× This makes me easier to access what I have looked at and decrease the.

✓ This makes it easier for me to access what I have noted and decreases the chance of forgetting.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语，且表达不清晰，需要补充完整并调整语序。