Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use clearer sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often forget what I want to eat for lunch, so I have to check my phone to remember my order.

제안: Your answer addresses the question well but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly, and clarify your reasons with better sentence structure.

예시: Yes, I often forget to bring my umbrella even when the weather forecast predicts rain. This is frustrating because I usually get stuck in the rain on my way to work. I think this happens because I am usually in a hurry and don't pay attention to the weather updates.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid confusing phrases like 'because I even forget it'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I always need to remember to take my vitamins on time because forgetting them can affect my energy levels. Taking vitamins helps me feel more energetic and improves my mood throughout the day.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'stay aloud for special time'. Use correct expressions and linking words to improve clarity and coherence.

예시: I usually use the reminder app on my phone to remember important things, such as bringing an umbrella on rainy days or finishing my homework on time. It is very convenient because it alerts me at the right time, ensuring I don't forget anything important.

× I over forget what I prefer to eat for lunch, which shows that my memory isn't very good.

✓ I often forget what I prefer to eat for lunch, which shows that my memory isn't very good.

The word 'over' is incorrectly used here; the correct adverb to express frequency is 'often'. This is a common mistake involving adverb usage, but since 'over' is not a modal or preposition here, it is best corrected as a past tense frequency adverb to fit the context.

× This is quite frustrating because I usually end up getting stuck on my way to work or school.

✓ This is quite frustrating because I usually end up stuck on my way to work or school.

The phrase 'end up getting stuck' is grammatically acceptable but can be simplified to 'end up stuck' for better style and clarity. However, since this is not a strict grammar error, it is optional.

× I have often forgotten to bring my umbrella even when the weather forecast predict rain.

✓ I have often forgotten to bring my umbrella even when the weather forecast predicts rain.

The verb 'predict' should be in the third person singular form 'predicts' to agree with the singular subject 'weather forecast'. This is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27) and third person singular issue (ID 2). Here, it is classified as a present tense issue because the verb is in present tense and needs to agree with the subject.

× I think it happens because it in my hurry time and it didn't pay any attention to the weather update.

✓ I think it happens because I am in a hurry and I didn't pay any attention to the weather update.

The original sentence has missing verbs and incorrect pronoun usage. 'It in my hurry time' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I am in a hurry'. Also, 'it didn't pay any attention' should be 'I didn't pay any attention' to correctly refer to the subject. This is a sentence structure error involving missing verbs and incorrect pronouns.

× I always need to remember to take my vitamins on time because I even forget it can really affect my energy levels throughout the day.

✓ I always need to remember to take my vitamins on time because forgetting can really affect my energy levels throughout the day.

The phrase 'I even forget it can really affect' is incorrect. The pronoun 'it' is misused here. The sentence should express that forgetting to take vitamins affects energy levels. Using 'forgetting' as a gerund subject clarifies the meaning. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure issue.

× I usually use the reminder app on my cell to help me remember important things such as bring an umbrella on rainy days or completing my homework on time.

✓ I usually use the reminder app on my phone to help me remember important things such as bringing an umbrella on rainy days or completing my homework on time.

After 'such as', the verb should be in the gerund (-ing) form to list examples correctly. 'Bring' should be 'bringing'. Also, 'cell' is better replaced with 'phone' for clarity. This is a verb + -ing form error.

× It is very convenient because I can stay aloud for special time which ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ It is very convenient because I can set an alarm for special times which ensures I don't forget anything important.

The phrase 'stay aloud for special time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'set an alarm for special times'. Also, 'ensure' should be 'ensures' to agree with the singular subject 'which'. This involves incorrect use of prepositions and subject-verb agreement.