Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、"umm"や"hmm"などのフィラーは避け、より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけましょう。また、具体的な例を加えると説得力が増します。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember conversations with my friends and the places where they happened. I also have a good memory for people's names.

제안: 文法の誤り（"forgotten"の使い方）に注意し、正しい過去形を使いましょう。また、"contact with"は不自然なので"contact"だけで十分です。さらに、回答を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げましょう。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important. For example, I missed the deadline for my assignment last time, so I had to contact the professor to explain the situation.

제안: 時制の一貫性を保ち、"had to"ではなく"have to"を使いましょう。また、文を分けて明確にし、より自然な表現を心がけてください。

예시: These days, I have to remember many English words for this test. I managed to learn about 1,000 words in a month, which was very challenging.

제안: 表現が不自然で冗長です。"memo to memo"は誤りで、"memo app"や"notes app"を使うのが適切です。文を簡潔にし、具体的に説明しましょう。

예시: I can't remember everything, so I use the notes app on my iPhone to keep track of deadlines and important information.

× For example, last time I forgotten my deadline of my assignment and I had to contact with the professor.

✓ For example, last time I forgot the deadline of my assignment and I had to contact the professor.

'Forgotten' is the past participle form and requires an auxiliary verb like 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Since the sentence refers to a specific past event, the simple past tense 'forgot' is appropriate here. Also, 'contact with' is incorrect; 'contact' is a transitive verb and does not need 'with'.

× Well, these days I had to remember the English words to this test and I remembered about 1000 words in a month, so it was very hard.

✓ Well, these days I have to remember the English words for this test and I have remembered about 1000 words in a month, so it was very hard.

The phrase 'these days' indicates the present time, so the present perfect tense 'have to remember' and 'have remembered' should be used instead of the past tense 'had to remember' and 'remembered'. Also, 'words to this test' should be 'words for this test' to use the correct preposition.

× Well, these days I had to remember the English words to this test and I remembered about 1000 words in a month, so it was very hard.

✓ Well, these days I have to remember the English words for this test and I have remembered about 1000 words in a month, so it was very hard.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect in this context; the correct preposition is 'for' when referring to the purpose of the test.

× For example, last time I forgotten my deadline of my assignment and I had to contact with the professor.

✓ For example, last time I forgot the deadline of my assignment and I had to contact the professor.

The verb 'contact' is transitive and does not require the preposition 'with'. Using 'contact with' is incorrect.

× And also I can remember people's name as well.

✓ And also I can remember people's names as well.

'People's' is plural, so the noun 'name' should be pluralized to 'names' to agree in number.

× In my daily life I can't remember everything, so I use the memo to memo of my phone iPhone to remember the deadlines and the content of.

✓ In my daily life I can't remember everything, so I use the memo app on my iPhone to remember the deadlines and the content.

The phrase 'use the memo to memo of my phone iPhone' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'use the memo app on my iPhone'. Also, 'content of' is incomplete and should be 'content'.