Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more structured and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence clarity.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, once my brother lost his watch, but I remembered where he usually kept his watches, so I helped him find it quickly.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by avoiding repetition. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and keep sentences concise.

예시: Yes, I once forgot my admit card at home during my board exams, which was very stressful because it was essential for entry. Since then, I have been very careful to keep my important documents safe.

제안: Focus on making your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and avoiding vague statements. Also, try to be more specific and avoid grammatical errors.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to carry my mobile phone and other essential accessories. Many people often forget their valuable items because they get distracted by other things.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by structuring it better and using clearer language. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words for a more natural response.

예시: I usually set alarms on my mobile phone to remind me of important tasks. Additionally, I use Apple products that notify me if I move away from them, which helps me keep track of my belongings.

× Yeah sure, I am very good at memorising things like whenever I want to kept anything at the place I generally easily remember and one day my brother lost his watch and but on the other hand I know where he keep his watches so I I helped him to find that watch.

✓ Yeah sure, I am very good at memorising things like whenever I want to keep anything in a place I generally easily remember and one day my brother lost his watch but on the other hand I know where he keeps his watches so I helped him to find that watch.

The verb 'kept' is incorrect here because the sentence is in present tense when talking about a habitual action, so 'keep' should be used instead of 'kept'. Also, 'keep' should be in third person singular form 'keeps' when referring to 'he'. The phrase 'and but' is redundant; only 'but' is needed. The preposition 'at' should be 'in' when referring to placing something inside a place. These corrections improve tense consistency and preposition usage.

× I know where he keep his watches

✓ I know where he keeps his watches

The subject 'he' requires the verb to be in third person singular form, so 'keep' should be 'keeps'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× I I helped him to find that watch.

✓ I helped him to find that watch.

The sentence is correct in past tense, but the repeated 'I' is a typographical error and should be removed for clarity.

× Yes, when I was in class 10th, I forgot my admit card at home and it was the worst experience for me because it was very important document to enter in board exams.

✓ Yes, when I was in class 10th, I forgot my admit card at home and it was the worst experience for me because it was a very important document to enter the board exams.

The sentence is mostly correct in past tense. However, the article 'a' is missing before 'very important document' (article error). Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'to' or 'for' when referring to entering exams, but 'to enter the board exams' is acceptable. These corrections improve article usage and preposition choice.

× So after that I never forget anything because from there I take care of my things very well.

✓ So after that I never forget anything because since then I have taken care of my things very well.

The phrase 'from there' is incorrect; 'since then' is appropriate to indicate time from a past event to present. Also, 'I take care' should be in present perfect tense 'I have taken care' to show an action continuing from past to present. This improves tense consistency and preposition usage.

× In my point of view, on the daily basis I have to remember about my mobile phone and other accessories which are very vital for me to daily use.

✓ In my point of view, on a daily basis I have to remember my mobile phone and other accessories which are very vital for my daily use.

The phrase 'remember about' is incorrect; 'remember' does not require 'about'. 'On the daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. Also, 'to daily use' should be 'for my daily use'. These corrections fix preposition and article usage.

× So people usually spend their time on other things and but they forgot their good and expensive thing at a place and after they forget it.

✓ So people usually spend their time on other things but they forget their good and expensive things at a place and then they forget them.

The conjunctions 'and but' are redundant; only 'but' is needed. The verb 'forgot' should be 'forget' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match 'their'. 'After they forget it' is unclear; 'then they forget them' is clearer. These corrections improve conjunction use, tense consistency, and plural agreement.

× Well, nowadays I set up alarm on my mobile phone and I also memorize things by like the keeping Apple product in it which send me a notification whenever I move far away from that product and it is quite beneficial for me.

✓ Well, nowadays I set up an alarm on my mobile phone and I also memorize things by keeping Apple products with me which send me a notification whenever I move far away from that product and it is quite beneficial for me.

The phrase 'by like the keeping' is incorrect; it should be 'by keeping'. 'Apple product' should be plural 'Apple products' if referring generally. The preposition 'in it' is incorrect; 'with me' is better. 'Send' should be 'send' as plural subject 'products' is used. These corrections improve modal verb usage, preposition use, and subject-verb agreement.