Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ хороший, но есть небольшие ошибки в грамматике и повтор слов. Постарайтесь избегать повторения и использовать более разнообразные выражения. Также улучшите связность, используя связующие слова.

예시: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorizing things. For instance, I can easily recall numbers and people's names, which is very helpful in social situations. Moreover, I tend to remember important details naturally, which benefits me in daily life.

제안: В вашем ответе есть грамматические ошибки и не совсем точные выражения. Также стоит использовать более точные слова и связки для улучшения логики и ясности.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, once I went to a place to relax but forgot my phone charger at home. As a result, my phone battery died quickly, so I couldn't listen to music or watch films, which made the experience quite boring.

제안: Ваш ответ немного неструктурирован и содержит ошибки в грамматике. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и старайтесь строить предложения более грамотно.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to allocate time for personal development and hobbies, such as preparing for my health exam and doing various activities. Furthermore, I try to reflect on my personal goals and engage in activities that bring me joy.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить связующие слова для улучшения плавности речи и немного расширить ответ для большей конкретики.

예시: I have a method for remembering important things, which I call "remembering the time." Basically, I try to recall the exact moment when I last saw or used the item, so that I can easily find it later. This technique helps me stay organized and avoid losing important belongings.

× I believe this ability come comes naturally to me.

✓ I believe this ability comes naturally to me.

The subject 'ability' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'comes' to agree with the subject.

× once I went to a same place to relax, but I forgot my phone charger at home.

✓ once I went to the same place to relax, but I forgot my phone charger at home.

The phrase 'a same place' is incorrect because 'same' requires the definite article 'the' instead of 'a'.

× which made me timeless.

✓ which made me feel timeless.

The verb 'made' should be followed by an object and an adjective or a verb in the base form. 'Timeless' is an adjective but the sentence lacks the verb 'feel' to express the sensation properly.

× In my daily life, I need to remember to find time for personal development and hobbies such as preparing for my health exam and do some activities.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember to find time for personal development and hobbies such as preparing for my health exam and doing some activities.

After 'such as', parallel structure is required. Since 'preparing' is a gerund, 'do' should be changed to 'doing' to maintain consistency.

× Additionally, I try to reflect on my personal goals and engage in activities then bring me joy.

✓ Additionally, I try to reflect on my personal goals and engage in activities that bring me joy.

The conjunction 'then' is incorrectly used here; it should be replaced with 'that' to introduce a relative clause describing the activities.