Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you good at memorising things?
수험생
For me, I think I'm not really good at that. I have like a goldfish memory. I mean, I think for like a short thing, I kind of like easily to forget it, but for like the thing that in the past that happened and it's memorable, then I can Remember Remember that really well.
시험관
Have you ever forgotten something important?
수험생
Yeah, for sure. I always forgot, forget everything, which is really important to me. And then it just made my life is more complicated because something important, which means that you couldn't forget that. But sometime I forget that and then I don't know what to do at that point.
시험관
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
수험생
So normally I would I would note on my phone that this is the list that I have to do in a in a day. But I always so busy with everything running my life and then I always forget it.
시험관
How do you remember important things?
수험생
I think the easiest way, just like repeat that in my mind all the time, like I have to do this, I have to do that and eventually I will try to remember that, to not forget that I think so.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "I kind of like easily to forget it" nên sửa thành "I tend to forget it easily". Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp từ như "Remember Remember" và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để tăng tính hiệu quả.
예시: I'm not very good at memorising things. I tend to forget short-term information easily, but I can remember important past events quite well.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
점수: 60.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ "I always forgot" nên là "I always forget") và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, có cấu trúc tốt với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ liên kết mạch lạc.
예시: Yes, I often forget important things, which makes my life more complicated. Sometimes, I don't know what to do when I realize I've forgotten something crucial.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "I would I would" và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách bạn quản lý công việc hàng ngày.
예시: Normally, I make a to-do list on my phone to remember daily tasks. However, I often get so busy that I end up forgetting some of them.
How do you remember important things?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có nhiều từ thừa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như "I think so". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: The easiest way for me is to repeat important tasks in my mind constantly. This helps me remember them and avoid forgetting.
문법
× I kind of like easily to forget it
✓ I kind of easily forget it
The phrase 'to forget' is incorrect after 'kind of like easily'. The verb should be in base form without 'to' after 'kind of' and 'like'. The correct form is 'kind of easily forget'. This is a common error in verb form usage.
× I always forgot, forget everything, which is really important to me
✓ I always forget everything which is really important to me
The verb 'forgot' is past tense and does not fit the present habitual action indicated by 'always'. The correct verb form is the present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action. Mixing past and present tense here causes confusion.
× And then it just made my life is more complicated because something important, which means that you couldn't forget that
✓ And then it just made my life more complicated because something important means that you can't forget it
The sentence has redundant and incorrect structure: 'made my life is more complicated' is incorrect; it should be 'made my life more complicated'. Also, 'which means that you couldn't forget that' is awkward and inconsistent in tense and pronoun use. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× But sometime I forget that and then I don't know what to do at that point
✓ But sometimes I forget that and then I don't know what to do at that point
'Sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at some time' but here the plural 'sometimes' is needed to indicate frequency. This is a common error in adverb usage.
× So normally I would I would note on my phone that this is the list that I have to do in a in a day
✓ So normally I would note on my phone that this is the list I have to do in a day
The repetition 'I would I would' is a redundancy error. Also, 'in a in a day' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing duplicates improves sentence clarity and correctness.
× But I always so busy with everything running my life and then I always forget it
✓ But I am always so busy with everything running my life and then I always forget it
The sentence lacks the verb 'am' to link the subject 'I' with the adjective phrase 'so busy'. The verb 'am' is necessary for correct present tense structure.
× I think the easiest way, just like repeat that in my mind all the time
✓ I think the easiest way is just to repeat that in my mind all the time
The phrase 'just like repeat' is incorrect. The correct form is 'just to repeat' or 'is just repeating'. Here, 'is just to repeat' fits better. The verb form after 'way' should be an infinitive or gerund with proper structure.
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