Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, for example, 'However' or 'But'.

예시: Yes, I'm good at memorizing things. I always remember important information; however, unnecessary details sometimes slip my mind.

제안: Avoid repeating filler words and try to be more concise. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly, such as 'because' or 'since'.

예시: I've never forgotten anything important because I take my responsibilities seriously and always strive to do my best.

제안: Use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar, for example, 'automatic' should be 'automatic' or 'habitual'. Also, try to link your ideas with words like 'for example' or 'such as'.

예시: Most of my daily tasks are automatic, such as meditating, tidying up the home, and helping my child brush her teeth.

제안: Improve sentence structure by using linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes such as 'reminder' should be 'reminders'.

예시: I remember important things by making to-do lists and setting reminders on my phone, which helps me a lot. Even if I don't write them down, I still remember, but having reminders gives me reassurance.

× maybe some details disappears in my mind

✓ maybe some details disappear in my mind

The subject 'details' is plural, so the verb should be 'disappear' to agree in number. Using 'disappears' is incorrect because it is singular form. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree in number.

× Most things I have to do during the day is automotive already.

✓ Most things I have to do during the day are automatic already.

The subject 'Most things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'automotive' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'automatic'. Suggestion: Match verb number with subject and use correct adjective form.

× I need to help a child to clean her teeth and so on.

✓ I need to help a child clean her teeth and so on.

The verb 'help' is followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Using 'to clean' after 'help' is incorrect. Suggestion: Use 'help someone do something' structure without 'to' before the verb.

× I remember important things with to do lists and I also set reminder on my phone and it helps me so much.

✓ I remember important things with to-do lists and I also set reminders on my phone and it helps me so much.

'To do lists' should be hyphenated as 'to-do lists'. Also, 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match the context of setting multiple reminders. Suggestion: Use correct hyphenation and plural form for countable nouns.

× Even if I don't write down it in my phone or on the paper I still remember them but it's some kind of reassurance.

✓ Even if I don't write it down in my phone or on paper, I still remember them but it's some kind of reassurance.

The pronoun 'it' should come before the verb 'write down' in the phrase 'write it down'. Also, 'on the paper' is better as 'on paper' without 'the'. Suggestion: Place object pronouns correctly and omit unnecessary articles with uncountable nouns.