Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل وجعل الإجابة أكثر وضوحًا وتركيزًا على السؤال. استخدم جملًا بسيطة ومباشرة للتعبير عن رأيك في قدرتك على التذكر.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when I focus and use techniques like repetition. However, sometimes I do forget small details.

제안: حاول تنظيم أفكارك بشكل أفضل واستخدام جمل واضحة ومترابطة. ركز على سرد تجربة محددة مع تفاصيل واضحة لتوضيح موقف نسيان شيء مهم.

예시: Yes, once I forgot my phone at school. I realized it the next day when I checked my pocket and it was missing, so I had to go back to school to find it.

제안: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر تنظيماً وتجنب التكرار. ركز على ذكر أمور محددة تحتاج لتذكرها يومياً مع شرح بسيط لأهميتها.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to pray on time, keep track of where I put my phone, and drink enough water to stay healthy.

제안: حاول توضيح الطريقة التي تستخدمها لتذكر الأشياء المهمة بشكل أكثر وضوحاً ومنطقية. استخدم جمل مترابطة مع أمثلة بسيطة.

예시: I usually remember important things by associating them with people or events. For example, if I need to remember to call a friend, I think about our last conversation.

× I think yes I'm good for remember but God thinks not in everything.

✓ I think yes, I'm good at remembering, but God thinks not in everything.

The phrase 'good for remember' is incorrect. The correct form is 'good at remembering' because 'good at' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Also, a comma is needed after 'yes' for clarity.

× God thinks our bad or like this.

✓ God thinks we are bad or something like this.

The pronoun 'our' is incorrectly used; it should be 'we are' to form a proper subject and verb. Also, 'like this' is better expressed as 'something like this' for clarity.

× Yes, of course I forgot that day my phone and the table and school.

✓ Yes, of course I forgot my phone at the table in school that day.

The sentence structure is confusing and lacks proper prepositions. 'Forgot that day my phone and the table and school' is incorrect. The correct past tense usage requires proper word order and prepositions.

× And after one day I I after a while I I checked in my pocket, I lost my phone.

✓ And after one day, after a while, I checked my pocket and realized I had lost my phone.

The sentence has repetition and incorrect tense usage. 'I lost my phone' should be in past perfect 'I had lost my phone' to indicate the phone was lost before checking the pocket.

× So I back I really I really had to school.

✓ So I went back; I really had to go to school.

The phrase 'I back' is incorrect; the past tense verb 'went back' is needed. Also, 'had to school' is incomplete; it should be 'had to go to school'.

× I need to remember maybe to pray to where I put my phone or drink water.

✓ I need to remember, maybe, to pray, where I put my phone, or to drink water.

The preposition 'to' before 'where I put my phone' is unnecessary and confusing. Also, parallel structure requires 'to' before 'drink water'.

× Of course, you know, sometimes you lost drink water, but you must drink water every day.

✓ Of course, you know, sometimes you forget to drink water, but you must drink water every day.

The phrase 'you lost drink water' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'you forget to drink water' to express the intended meaning.

× 2-3 letters.

✓ Two to three liters.

The word 'letters' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'liters' to refer to quantity of water. Also, numbers should be spelled out in formal speech.

× I remember a person thinking because of course iTunes important things.

✓ I remember by thinking about a person because, of course, it is important.

The sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'I remember a person thinking' is confusing; the correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects capitalization and structure.

× So if I lost this, I will this, you know, if I lost something, I lost something like this.

✓ So if I lose something, I will remember it, you know, if I lose something like this.

The sentence has repetition and incorrect tense. 'Lost' should be 'lose' for present/future conditional, and the sentence is restructured for clarity.