Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cavabınızda daha aydın və qısa ifadələrdən istifadə edin. "Umm" və "uh" kimi sözləri azaltmaq və fikirlərinizi daha səlis ifadə etmək üçün çalışın. Məsələn, mövzunu birbaşa cavablandırın və sonra dəstəkləyici nümunə verin.

예시: Yes, I think I am fairly good at memorising things. However, sometimes I forget specific details, like the exact year of a childhood event my mother mentioned. Overall, I try to remember important information as best as I can.

제안: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlardan qaçın və qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin. Məsələn, "I and I always lived those bags" ifadəsi qarışıqdır. Daha aydın və düzgün cümlələr qurmağa çalışın.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten many things, including my bags. When I was a child, I often left my colorful bags on the bus or in my relatives' cars, so I lost many of them over time.

제안: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qısa edin, təkrarlardan və qarışıqlıqdan qaçının. Məsələn, "That's why when I'm that's why remembering those tasks tasks and to properly" cümləsi anlaşılmazdır. Sadə və məntiqli ifadələr istifadə edin.

예시: In my daily life, I have many tasks to complete. To remember them properly, I write a list, which helps me keep track of what I need to do.

제안: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin, qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin. Məsələn, "what tasks I need to done" ifadəsi səhvlidir. Daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi məntiqli şəkildə birləşdirin.

예시: I usually remember important things by writing them down on my phone, which I always have with me. This way, I can easily check my tasks or shopping list for the next day.

× Like I lost lots of bags since today.

✓ Like I have lost lots of bags since today.

The sentence uses the simple past tense 'lost' with 'since today', which is incorrect because 'since' requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to the present. The correct form is 'have lost'.

× I and I always lived those bags on the bus or on our relatives car.

✓ I always left those bags on the bus or in our relatives' car.

The verb 'lived' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'left'. Also, 'on our relatives car' should be 'in our relatives' car' because we say 'in a car'. Additionally, the possessive form 'relatives'' is needed to show ownership.

× That's why when I'm that's why remembering those tasks tasks and to properly.

✓ That's why I need to remember those tasks properly.

The original sentence is fragmented and repetitive ('that's why' repeated, 'tasks tasks'). The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct, expressing the intended meaning.

× I have a list that I write down them there and so I can easily remember what should I do.

✓ I have a list where I write them down so I can easily remember what I should do.

The phrase 'write down them there' is incorrect; the correct order is 'write them down there'. Also, 'what should I do' should be 'what I should do' in indirect speech.

× For remembering important things I usually write down on a list or on my phone.

✓ To remember important things, I usually write them down on a list or on my phone.

The phrase 'For remembering' is awkward; 'To remember' is the correct infinitive form. Also, 'write down' needs an object, so 'write them down' is correct.

× Mostly on my phone because my phone is always with me and I write them there so I can easily see what I need or for example what I need to buy or what tasks I need to done for tomorrow.

✓ Mostly on my phone because my phone is always with me and I write them there so I can easily see what I need, for example, what I need to buy or what tasks I need to do for tomorrow.

The phrase 'what tasks I need to done' is incorrect; it should be 'what tasks I need to do' because 'do' is the base form after 'need to'. Also, the sentence is improved by adding commas for clarity.