Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连接词使句子更连贯。例如，直接说明你擅长记忆什么，并给出具体例子。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things like people's ages and prices because numbers are easier for me to remember.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的部分，建议简洁表达并避免无关内容。可以说明你如何避免忘记重要事情，并举例说明。

예시: I rarely forget important things because I use reminders and calendars to stay organized, a habit I learned from my husband.

제안: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够清晰，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

예시: As a full-time mother, I need to remember many things daily, such as buying groceries like food and fruits, and doing the laundry several times a week.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，建议简洁明了地说明你使用的记忆方法，并用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I use various tools like calendars, reminders, and timers to help me remember important things because our minds can get busy easily.

× It depends on what things they are comparing to my friends.

✓ It depends on what things they are compared to my friends.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrectly used here; the sentence should use the passive form 'are compared' to correctly express the comparison. The original sentence confuses the subject and object roles.

× I'm really good at them remembering things such as people's age and the prices, I think.

✓ I'm really good at remembering things such as people's ages and prices, I think.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly placed before the gerund 'remembering'; it should be omitted. Also, 'age' and 'prices' need to be plural to match the context.

× I think things like the numbers, which are quite easily to remember for me.

✓ I think things like numbers are quite easy to remember for me.

The phrase 'quite easily to remember' is incorrect; 'easy' is the correct adjective to describe 'things' here. Also, 'the numbers' should be 'numbers' without 'the' for generalization.

× if something are important to me, I will try to use reminders and calendars so I can stay organized and avoid forgetting them.

✓ if something is important to me, I will try to use reminders and calendars so I can stay organized and avoid forgetting them.

The subject 'something' is singular and requires the singular verb 'is' instead of 'are'.

× I think this is very good habit that I learn from my husband. She is pretty busy, he is pretty. See.

✓ I think this is a very good habit that I learned from my husband. He is pretty busy, you see.

The pronouns 'She' and 'he' are incorrectly used; 'he' should refer to the husband. Also, 'good habit' needs the article 'a'. 'Learn' should be past tense 'learned' to match the context. 'See' should be 'you see' for clarity.

× As a full time mother I have lot of things to remember in my daily routine and 1st I need to do grocery shoppings or what things are what food and fruit I need to buy and the second thing is to do the laundry several times.

✓ As a full-time mother, I have a lot of things to remember in my daily routine. First, I need to do grocery shopping and decide what food and fruit I need to buy. The second thing is to do the laundry several times.

'Lot' needs the article 'a' to become 'a lot'. 'Grocery shoppings' is incorrect; 'shopping' is uncountable and should not be pluralized. The sentence is long and needs to be split for clarity. '1st' should be written as 'First'.

× As I mentioned earlier, there are sorts of techniques, tools and the tools help me to remember important things are my.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, there are various techniques and tools, and the tools that help me remember important things are mine.

The sentence is unclear and has misplaced words. 'Are my' is incomplete; it should be 'are mine' to indicate possession. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I often use calendars, reminder and timer to help me to remember these things.

✓ I often use calendars, reminders, and timers to help me remember these things.

'Reminder' and 'timer' should be plural to match 'calendars' as multiple tools are implied. Also, 'help me to remember' can be simplified to 'help me remember'.

× I think people's minds are easily get busy so. 10.

✓ I think people's minds easily get busy, so...

The phrase 'are easily get busy' is incorrect; it should be 'easily get busy'. The sentence ends abruptly with '10', which seems out of place and is removed for clarity.