Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I have developed effective techniques during my studies. For example, I use mnemonic devices to remember historical dates, which helps me recall information quickly.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I forgot to watch my younger siblings as my mother asked, which made her very upset.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và đầy đủ ý. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, especially English vocabulary for my studies. For example, I try to learn new words every day to improve my language skills.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và thiếu cấu trúc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích phương pháp bạn sử dụng để ghi nhớ, kèm theo ví dụ cụ thể.

예시: I usually use my phone to set reminders for important tasks. For example, if I have an appointment, I set an alarm so I don't forget it.

× Absolutely yes, because I'm star history at school, so I have learned how to memorize everything in a ethnic way.

✓ Absolutely yes, because I'm a star student in history at school, so I have learned how to memorize everything in an effective way.

The phrase 'star history' is incorrect; it should be 'star student in history' to properly describe the student's excellence in the subject. Also, 'ethnic way' is likely a misuse; 'effective way' fits the context better. This error is about incorrect use of adjectives and nouns.

× For example, I was able to.

✓ For example, I was able to do so.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or verb complement after 'able to'. Adding 'do so' completes the thought. This is a past tense usage issue because 'was able to' requires a following verb or phrase.

× To be honest, I forgot. I have forgotten anything.

✓ To be honest, I haven't forgotten anything.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'forgot' and 'have forgotten' in a contradictory way. The correct negative form is 'haven't forgotten' to express that the speaker has not forgotten anything. This is a past tense and present perfect tense usage issue.

× Like my mother requires me to watch the disciples, I have forgotten.

✓ Like when my mother requires me to watch the dishes, I have forgotten.

The word 'disciples' is incorrect here; it should be 'dishes'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding 'when' clarifies the meaning. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and vocabulary.

× And then she was very angry.

✓ And then she became very angry.

Using 'was' is grammatically correct but 'became' better expresses the change of emotion. This is a past tense usage improvement.

× At in my opinion, I take.

✓ In my opinion, I think.

The phrase 'At in my opinion, I take' is ungrammatical and confusing. The correct phrase is 'In my opinion, I think.' This is a sentence structure error.

× I have to remember. My knowledge about our school, those, for example, I have to remember a lot of words, they are in English.

✓ I have to remember my knowledge about our school. For example, I have to remember a lot of words in English.

The sentence is fragmented and uses 'those' and 'they are' incorrectly. The correction combines ideas clearly and removes unnecessary pronouns. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure issue.

× I also have to.

✓ I also have to do that.

The sentence is incomplete; 'I also have to' needs an object or verb complement to be complete. This is a sentence structure error.

× I think I have to uh, uh. A child remember important things and I.

✓ I think I have to, uh, remember important things like a child does.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction completes the thought and clarifies the comparison. This is a sentence structure error.

× While those are my phone and then I cannot see it, remember I have to.

✓ When my phone is not with me and I cannot see it, I have to remember things.

The phrase 'While those are my phone' is incorrect; 'those' is a plural pronoun and does not refer to 'phone'. The sentence is restructured for clarity. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and sentence structure error.