Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: La risposta è troppo breve e poco strutturata. Dovresti rispondere direttamente alla domanda con una frase chiara, poi aggiungere dettagli specifici per arricchire la risposta, usando parole di collegamento per rendere il discorso più fluido.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details easily. For example, I sometimes forget appointments if I don't write them down.

제안: La risposta manca di chiarezza e coerenza. Usa una struttura più chiara con una frase principale e dettagli specifici, collegandoli con connettivi per migliorare la fluidità.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things several times, especially when I am distracted. For instance, once I forgot my friend's birthday because I was busy with work.

제안: La risposta è confusa e poco naturale. Cerca di rispondere direttamente con una frase chiara e poi aggiungi dettagli specifici usando parole di collegamento per rendere il discorso più coerente.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks like meetings or deadlines. Usually, I rely on reminders on my phone to help me.

제안: La risposta è ripetitiva e poco chiara. Dovresti evitare ripetizioni e strutturare la risposta con una frase principale seguita da dettagli specifici, usando connettivi per migliorare la coerenza.

예시: I remember important things by setting reminders on my phone or asking friends to remind me. This helps me stay organized and not forget crucial tasks.

× I literally forgot everything.

✓ I literally forget everything.

The sentence is in the context of habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' is more appropriate than the past tense 'forgot'.

× Maybe I need someone to Remember Me, what I needed to do, what I had to do, principally if it is something important, or maybe that I see something terrible on my phone and then I remember.

✓ Maybe I need someone to remind me what I need to do, especially if it is something important, or maybe when I see something terrible on my phone and then I remember.

The phrase 'Remember Me' is incorrect; the verb 'remember' is not used with an object pronoun like 'me' in this way. Instead, 'remind me' is correct. Also, tense consistency is needed: 'needed' and 'had to do' should be 'need to do' to match the present context. 'Principally' is incorrectly used; 'especially' is more appropriate.

× As I said before, if I see something on my phone or if someone reminds me of that thing I will remember.

✓ As I said before, if I see something on my phone or if someone reminds me of that thing, I will remember it.

The sentence lacks the object pronoun 'it' after 'remember' to clarify what is being remembered.

× But usually when I have some really important things I usually like remember them princely if they are important.

✓ But usually when I have some really important things, I usually like to remember them especially if they are important.

The word 'princely' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'especially'. Also, 'like remember' should be 'like to remember' for correct verb form. A comma is needed after the introductory clause.