Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“in daylight”用法不当，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复和犹豫词汇。

예시: Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or phone during the day, so I usually have to spend some time looking for them.

제안: 回答中有重复和犹豫词汇，且时间表达不准确。建议简洁明了地描述事件，并使用正确的时间表达。

예시: Yes, about two weeks ago, I lost my school ID card on the school bus, and I was very worried at that time.

제안: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，缺少连贯性。建议先给出主题句，然后用具体细节支持，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: As a student, I need to remember the tasks and assignments my professors give me. Besides that, I also try to remember small daily things like appointments or errands.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但有语法错误，如“help”应为“helps”，且表达可以更自然。建议注意主谓一致，并使用更地道的表达。

예시: I usually use the reminder app on my phone because it's convenient and I always have my phone with me. Sometimes, I also write things down on paper because it helps me stay organized and see my tasks clearly.

× I often forget where I put my kids and phones

✓ I often forget where I put my keys and phone

这里的 'kids' 应该是 'keys'，因为语境中是指钥匙，而不是孩子；'phones' 应该是单数 'phone'，因为通常人们只有一部手机。注意单复数的正确使用。

× so I need to find it at most of the time

✓ so I need to find them most of the time

这里指代的是复数的 'keys and phone'，所以代词应该用复数 'them'，而不是单数 'it'。

× just in two weeks ago, I lost my school ID card on, on the school bus

✓ just two weeks ago, I lost my school ID card on the school bus

'just in two weeks ago' 中 'in' 不需要，正确表达是 'just two weeks ago'。另外，重复的 'on' 应该去掉。

× I was so worried at this time

✓ I was so worried at that time

这里描述的是过去的时间，应该用 'that time' 而不是 'this time'。

× I need to remember what task or umm assignment post of it for my professors that I need to finish

✓ I need to remember what tasks or assignments my professors post that I need to finish

句子结构混乱，'post of it' 不正确，应该改为 'my professors post'，并且 'task' 和 'assignment' 应该用复数形式。

× in daily life I need to remember the little thing

✓ in daily life I need to remember the little things

'thing' 应该用复数 'things'，因为这里指的是多件小事。

× Sometimes I will write down on the papers because it help me to organize and I can see clearly

✓ Sometimes I will write things down on paper because it helps me to organize and I can see clearly

'write down on the papers' 不自然，应该是 'write things down on paper'；'it help' 主语是单数 'it'，动词应加 's' 变为 'helps'。