Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意动词形式和冠词的使用，同时避免重复表达。可以用更自然的表达方式来描述记忆能力。

예시: Yes, I have a strong memory for faces. I can easily recognize people I've met before, which often surprises my friends.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句式，避免冗长和重复。可以更具体地描述事件经过。

예시: Yes, once I left my cellphone in a taxi. Since I couldn't contact the driver, I went to the police station to ask for help.

제안: 回答表达不够流畅，存在语法和用词错误。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并注意连贯性。

예시: I always remember to bring my access card because it's necessary to enter my home. Without it, I would have to travel far to get a replacement.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，清晰描述记忆方法，并注意逻辑连贯。

예시: I usually write important things on notes and stick them where I can see. I also set alarms on my clock with specific labels to remind me.

× I'm good at memorizing others face, I can always recognize others that I've met before and the friends around me are all surprised with such kind of memory I have.

✓ I'm good at memorizing others' faces, I can always recognize others that I've met before and the friends around me are all surprised with such kind of memory I have.

这里“others face”中的“face”应为复数形式“faces”，因为“others”指代多个人，脸也应为复数。英语中名词的单复数要与其修饰的数量保持一致。

× I'm good at memorizing others face, I can always recognize others that I've met before and the friends around me are all surprised with such kind of memory I have.

✓ I'm good at memorizing others' faces, I can always recognize others whom I've met before and the friends around me are all surprised with such kind of memory I have.

“recognize others that I've met before”中，关系代词“that”用于指人时不够正式，应该用“whom”更合适。

× I have forgotten my cellphone on the taxi and at that time I had nothing to ask the drivers to bring the phone back so I could just went to the police officer to for help.

✓ I have forgotten my cellphone in the taxi and at that time I had no way to ask the driver to bring the phone back so I just went to the police officer for help.

“could just went”中“went”是过去式，情态动词“could”后应接动词原形“go”。另外，“on the taxi”应为“in the taxi”，因为乘坐交通工具用介词“in”。“had nothing to ask”表达不准确，应改为“had no way to ask”。

× I have forgotten my cellphone on the taxi and at that time I had nothing to ask the drivers to bring the phone back so I could just went to the police officer to for help.

✓ I have forgotten my cellphone in the taxi and at that time I had no way to ask the driver to bring the phone back so I just went to the police officer for help.

表示在交通工具内应使用介词“in”而非“on”。

× I have forgotten my cellphone on the taxi and at that time I had nothing to ask the drivers to bring the phone back so I could just went to the police officer to for help.

✓ I have forgotten my cellphone in the taxi and at that time I had no way to ask the driver to bring the phone back so I just went to the police officer for help.

“drivers”应为单数“driver”，因为通常指的是一位司机。

× I could just went to the police officer to for help.

✓ I just went to the police officer for help.

“to for help”中“to”多余，应去掉。

× I need to remember to take the card with me in my daily life because the card is used to enter the home and without it I have to go to really far place to get another card back.

✓ I need to remember to take the card with me in my daily life because the card is used to enter the home and without it I have to go to a really far place to get another card.

“go to really far place”缺少冠词，应为“go to a really far place”。“get another card back”中“back”多余，应去掉。

× I need to remember to take the card with me in my daily life because the card is used to enter the home and without it I have to go to really far place to get another card back.

✓ I need to remember to take the card with me in my daily life because the card is used to enter the home and without it I have to go to a really far place to get another card.

“another”后不应加“back”，因为“get another card”已表达取回的意思。

× I always remember important things by writing down on the paper and stick them at somewhere I will see and also I will use the clock to help me.

✓ I always remember important things by writing them down on paper and sticking them somewhere I will see, and also I use the clock to help me.

“writing down on the paper”应为“writing them down on paper”，因为“write down”后直接接宾语。动词“stick”应改为动名词“sticking”以保持结构一致。介词“at somewhere”错误，应为“somewhere”。

× I always remember important things by writing down on the paper and stick them at somewhere I will see and also I will use the clock to help me.

✓ I always remember important things by writing them down on paper and sticking them somewhere I will see, and also I use the clock to help me.

“by”后应接动名词形式，故“stick”应改为“sticking”。

× I always remember important things by writing down on the paper and stick them at somewhere I will see and also I will use the clock to help me.

✓ I always remember important things by writing them down on paper and sticking them somewhere I will see, and also I use the clock to help me.

“at somewhere”用法错误，应直接用“somewhere”。

× I will name the clock and when the clock is turned on I will remember.

✓ I name the clock, and when the clock is turned on, I remember.

这里描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时而非将来时。