Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は自然ですが、文法ミス（"I'm don't forget"）があり、より明確で簡潔な表現が望ましいです。また、接続詞を使って文の流れを良くしましょう。

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example, I often forget what to buy or where to go. Therefore, I make a list every day to help me remember important tasks.

제안: 内容は具体的で良いですが、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。また、過去の経験を説明する際に時制を統一しましょう。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things. For instance, when I was a high school student, I had to attend important international meetings at night, but I forgot to attend one, and by the time I realized, it had already finished.

제안: 文法の誤り（"If I couldn't submit"）があり、より自然な表現に改善しましょう。また、内容をもう少し具体的に説明すると良いです。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember the deadlines for submitting assignments at university because missing them can lower my grades.

제안: 時制の一貫性がなく、文法的な誤り（"I had two methods" と "I told about"）があります。より自然で正確な表現を心がけましょう。

예시: To remember important things, I use two methods. First, I make a list every morning and check it throughout the day. Second, I discuss important tasks with my friend to remind each other.

× By doing so, I'm don't forget important things.

✓ By doing so, I don't forget important things.

'I'm don't' is incorrect because 'I'm' is a contraction of 'I am' and cannot be followed by 'don't'. The correct form is 'I don't forget' to express the negative present tense. The error is due to incorrect auxiliary verb usage.

× But I forgot to attend the meeting and when I realized it, it was finished.

✓ But I forgot to attend the meeting and when I realized it, it had finished.

The meeting finished before the realization, so the past perfect tense 'had finished' is appropriate to indicate the sequence of past events. Using 'was finished' is less precise here.

× In daily lives, I have to remember when to submit assignments at the university because I am a university student.

✓ In daily life, I have to remember when to submit assignments at the university because I am a university student.

'Daily life' is an uncountable noun and should be singular. Using 'daily lives' is incorrect in this context.

× If I couldn't submit the assignment, my scores become worse.

✓ If I can't submit the assignment, my scores become worse.

The sentence talks about a general condition, so the present tense 'can't' is appropriate instead of past tense 'couldn't'. Also, 'become' is correct in present tense here.

× In order not to forget important things, I had two methods.

✓ In order not to forget important things, I have two methods.

The student is describing current methods, so present tense 'have' is correct instead of past tense 'had'.

× First, I make a list every morning and check it every day.

✓ First, I make a list every morning and check it every day.

This sentence is correct in present tense and needs no correction.

× Second, I told about the important things each other with my friend.

✓ Second, I talk about important things with my friend.

'Told about' is incorrect; the verb 'talk about' is appropriate. Also, 'each other' is misused here; it is used for reciprocal actions and is unnecessary in this sentence. The tense should be present to match the context.