Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you good at memorising things?
수험생
I'm not good at memorizing new things. For example, I often forget to attend important meetings and important classes, and so I make it rude to make a list to remember them.
시험관
Have you ever forgotten something important?
수험생
I have forgetting something important when I was a junior high school student. I forget attending so great important meeting so I can get full scores on the test. It was unforgettable experience for me.
시험관
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
수험생
In order not to forget the important things, making a list and checking them is great important. For example, I make list every morning in order not to forget important things.
시험관
How do you remember important things?
수험생
In order to remember important things, I make list on the paper and bring it with me. And I check it every time everywhere, for example after having meals. By doing so I do not forget important things every day.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答が少し不自然で冗長です。"make it rude to make a list"の表現は誤りで、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然な表現を使い、具体的な例を簡潔に述べることが重要です。
예시: I'm not very good at memorizing new things. For example, I often forget important meetings, so I usually make a list to help me remember them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
점수: 50.0제안: 文法ミスが多く、意味が分かりにくいです。過去の経験を話す際は、過去形を正しく使い、具体的な内容を明確に述べることが必要です。
예시: Yes, when I was in junior high school, I forgot to attend an important meeting because I was focused on studying for a test. It was an unforgettable experience for me.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
점수: 60.0제안: 表現が少し不自然で、語彙の使い方に改善の余地があります。より自然な表現で、具体的な習慣を説明すると良いでしょう。
예시: To avoid forgetting important things, I make a list every morning and check it throughout the day.
How do you remember important things?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答は比較的明確ですが、文法と語順に改善が必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より流暢に話す練習をしましょう。
예시: To remember important things, I write a list on paper and carry it with me. I check it regularly, for example, after meals, so I don't forget anything important.
문법
× I have forgetting something important when I was a junior high school student.
✓ I have forgotten something important when I was a junior high school student.
The verb 'have' should be followed by the past participle form 'forgotten' to form the present perfect tense, not the '-ing' form 'forgetting'.
× I forget attending so great important meeting so I can get full scores on the test.
✓ I forgot attending such a great important meeting so I could get full scores on the test.
The sentence refers to a past event, so the verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot'. Also, 'can' should be changed to 'could' to match the past tense context.
× making a list and checking them is great important.
✓ making a list and checking them is very important.
The phrase 'great important' is incorrect; the correct adverb to modify 'important' is 'very'.
× I make list every morning in order not to forget important things.
✓ I make a list every morning in order not to forget important things.
The noun 'list' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.
× I make list on the paper and bring it with me.
✓ I make a list on the paper and bring it with me.
The singular noun 'list' requires the article 'a' before it.
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