Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达“我认为”，并且可以增加具体例子来支持观点。

예시: I am quite good at memorising important information, especially when studying. For example, I use flashcards to remember vocabulary, which helps me retain the information effectively.

제안: 回答中语法和表达需改进，避免模糊回答，建议直接说明具体情况并使用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: I rarely forget important things because I always write them down and set alarms on my phone to remind me.

제안: 回答应注意语法一致性，复数形式的使用，以及可以增加更多细节使内容更丰富。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like assignment deadlines and meetings with my professors or colleagues.

제안: 回答中应避免重复表达，使用更自然的连接词，并且可以详细说明具体方法。

예시: To remember important things, I usually set reminders on my phone and keep a notebook where I write down tasks, so I can review them regularly.

× I only remember the important thing in my daily life, such as the deadline of my assignment and some important meeting.

✓ I only remember the important things in my daily life, such as the deadlines of my assignments and some important meetings.

这里涉及单复数问题。'thing' 应该用复数形式 'things'，因为后面列举了多个事项；'deadline' 和 'assignment' 也应使用复数形式以匹配多个截止日期和作业；'meeting' 也应为复数形式 'meetings'。

× I will write them down in my notes so I can take it out and look them constantly.

✓ I will write them down in my notes so I can take them out and look at them constantly.

这里代词使用错误。'it' 指代单数，但前文 'notes' 是复数，故应使用复数代词 'them'。此外，'look them' 缺少介词，应为 'look at them'。