Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但语言不够自然，句子结构有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免冗余。例如，可以用更流畅的句子连接词来增强表达。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. Therefore, I usually rely on apps or notes, and sometimes I ask others to help me remember important matters.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意时态一致性，并用更准确的词汇表达感受，如用"distressing"代替"disturbed"。

예시: Yes, I often forget important things, which is quite distressing for me because it causes me to miss important events and negatively affects my life.

제안: 回答不完整且句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用连接词使句子连贯，并避免句尾未完成。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember things like the shopping list my mother gives me. Usually, I have to buy regular vegetables and fruits, but sometimes I mistakenly buy the wrong items.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式，同时用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I usually remember important things by taking notes and using apps. Additionally, I tell someone I trust about these things, and they remind me regularly.

× Yes, I always forgot something significant and this is very disturbed for me because I will miss some important things and it will affect my life a lot.

✓ Yes, I always forget something significant and this is very disturbing for me because I miss some important things and it affects my life a lot.

The student used 'forgot' which is past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so present tense 'forget' should be used. Also, 'disturbed' is an adjective describing a feeling, but here the correct form is 'disturbing' to describe the situation causing the feeling. Additionally, 'will miss' and 'will affect' should be in present tense 'miss' and 'affects' to match the habitual context.

× Yes, I always forgot something significant and this is very disturbed for me because I will miss some important things and it will affect my life a lot.

✓ Yes, I always forget something significant and this is very disturbing for me because I miss some important things and it affects my life a lot.

The adjective 'disturbed' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'disturbing' to describe something that causes disturbance. Using the '-ing' form is necessary to express the ongoing effect.

× In my daily life I need to remember several things such as my mother gives me a shopping list, I need to buy the regular vegetable and fruits, but I sometimes will remember wrong and buy something wrong and.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember several things such as when my mother gives me a shopping list. I need to buy the regular vegetables and fruits, but sometimes I remember incorrectly and buy the wrong things.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks clarity. It needs to be split into clearer parts. Also, 'vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables' to match 'fruits'. The phrase 'remember wrong' is incorrect; 'remember incorrectly' is better. The sentence ending with 'and' is incomplete and should be corrected.

× In my daily life I need to remember several things such as my mother gives me a shopping list, I need to buy the regular vegetable and fruits, but I sometimes will remember wrong and buy something wrong and.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember several things such as when my mother gives me a shopping list. I need to buy the regular vegetables and fruits, but sometimes I remember incorrectly and buy the wrong things.

The word 'vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables' to agree with 'fruits' and to correctly refer to multiple items.

× No, my memory is very bad, so I need to remember something important by using apps and logs or ask for people to help me remember.

✓ No, my memory is very bad, so I need to remember important things by using apps and logs or asking people to help me remember.

The phrase 'ask for people' is incorrect; it should be 'asking people' without 'for'. Also, 'something important' is better as 'important things' to match the context of multiple items to remember.

× I usually remember important things by using notes and apps and I will ask for someone I believe and told them the important things and in the regular time they will remind me.

✓ I usually remember important things by using notes and apps, and I will ask someone I trust and tell them the important things, and at the right time they will remind me.

The phrase 'ask for someone I believe' is incorrect; it should be 'ask someone I trust'. Also, 'told them' should be 'tell them' to maintain tense consistency. 'In the regular time' is awkward; 'at the right time' is more natural.