Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“high sensitive”应为“highly sensitive”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things, especially unpleasant experiences, because I am highly sensitive and tend to remember details for a long time.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且未直接回答问题。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并使用正确的时态和词汇。

예시: I can't recall forgetting anything very important, but I have missed trains a few times because I was distracted.

제안: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“blogs”应为“blocks”或“restrictions”，句子不够连贯。建议使用更准确的词汇，并简洁表达。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember small things like passwords for my work accounts. Every morning, I have to enter them several times because of strict security measures on our system.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但句子结构可以更自然，且“mass information”用词不当。建议使用更地道的表达方式。

예시: I prefer to write important things down in my planner because it helps me organize information and remember it more effectively.

× The details of those things lost in my mind for a long time.

✓ The details of those things have been lost in my mind for a long time.

这里“details”是复数，谓语动词应与之保持一致，且句子描述的是过去持续到现在的状态，应该使用现在完成时。原句中动词“lost”用法不当，应改为“have been lost”。

× Maybe because I'm a high sensitive, I have some high sensitive characteristic.

✓ Maybe because I'm highly sensitive, I have some highly sensitive characteristics.

“high sensitive”用法错误，形容词“sensitive”前应使用副词“highly”修饰，且“characteristic”应使用复数形式“characteristics”。

× I don't remember I had such experiences, but sometimes instead of forgot, forgotten, I missing trains several times before.

✓ I don't remember having such experiences, but sometimes, instead of forgetting, I missed trains several times before.

“I had such experiences”应改为“having such experiences”以符合“remember”后接动名词的用法；“forgotten”用法错误，应为动名词“forgetting”；“I missing trains”缺少助动词，应改为“I missed trains”。

× I need to remember some little things such as password for my computer for my working accounts.

✓ I need to remember some small things such as passwords for my computer and my work accounts.

“little things”不太合适，改为“small things”更自然；“password”应为复数“passwords”，且“for my working accounts”表达不清，应改为“for my computer and my work accounts”。

× Every day in the morning I need to enter several times for my computer because there was a strict blogs for our working system and that took me.

✓ Every morning, I need to enter my password several times on my computer because there is a strict block on our working system, and that takes time.

“was”应改为现在时“is”，因为描述的是习惯性事实；“blogs”应为“blocks”；“that took me”表达不完整，应为“that takes time”。

× I prefer to write down on my planner.

✓ I prefer to write things down in my planner.

“write down”后应接宾语，“on my planner”应改为“in my planner”，因为写在计划本里用“in”。

× Writing things can make me organize the mass information and remember better.

✓ Writing things down can help me organize a large amount of information and remember better.

“mass information”表达不自然，应改为“a large amount of information”；“make me organize”改为“help me organize”更合适。