Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“arrange a task to me”应改为“assign me a task”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免冗余。

예시: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorizing things. Sometimes my children assign me tasks, and I have to write them down to avoid forgetting.

제안: 回答中应注意时态和表达的准确性，如“tap it on our phone”不够自然，建议用“note it on my phone”。同时，回答可以更具体，举例说明。

예시: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always write down important tasks or note them on my phone to remember.

제안: 回答中应注意名词的复数形式和表达的准确性，如“new policy”应为“new policies”，“the request by clients”应为“clients' requests”。可以增加细节使回答更具体。

예시: I work in a bank, so I need to remember new policies and clients' requests to provide good service.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，最后一句“because it may be”没有完整表达意思。建议完整表达原因，并避免重复。

예시: I usually record important information on my phone because it's convenient and accessible. However, when talking with clients, I prefer jotting notes on paper to remember details more easily.

× Sometimes my boys arrange a task to me.

✓ Sometimes my boys arrange a task for me.

介词“to”在这里用法不正确，应该用“for”表示任务是为我安排的。

× I should write it down on my paper, otherwise I would forget to finish it.

✓ I should write it down on my paper, otherwise I will forget to finish it.

这里表示将来可能发生的情况，应该用“will”而不是“would”。

× If there were something important, we should write it down or tap it on our phone to remember it.

✓ If there is something important, we should write it down or tap it on our phone to remember it.

条件句中表示现在或将来事实，应该用“is”而不是“were”。

× so the things I need to remember are new policy and the request by clients.

✓ so the things I need to remember are new policies and the requests by clients.

“policy”和“request”在这里应使用复数形式，因为指多个政策和多个请求。

× But sometimes when I am chatting with my clients, I like remembering things on my paper because it may be.

✓ But sometimes when I am chatting with my clients, I like remembering things on my paper because it may be more convenient.

句子不完整，缺少原因说明，需补充完整表达。